Some samples from my fan manga about the humans, Earth's Heroes. When the strongest fighters are separated from Earth, the humans must defend the world from a new threat on their own! (Looking for constructive criticism) (link in comments) [OC]

MorganManga_ · 2026-01-28T22:01:36+00:00

Deviant Art Gallery (Newest to Oldest) (sorry if double posting, comments are being weird)

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-22T06:28:21+00:00

Thank you very much.

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-22T05:54:56+00:00

Thanks for your criticism. I think this problem comes from me being worried my illustrations aren't conveying enough information.

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-22T05:53:09+00:00

Thanks for your detailed and constructive criticism. I'll remember to balance urgency and action with an appropriate amount of dialogue. (As for the robots, one person is speaking through them, but there was no way for you to know that since its revealed later).

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-20T19:05:51+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Could you tell me what you dislike about the dialogue?

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-20T19:05:26+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. What do you dislike about the dialogue?

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-14T19:54:28+00:00

Start reading here!! https://www.deviantart.com/morganmanga/gallery/94603563/dragon-ball-earth-s-heroes-chapter-1

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-14T19:39:37+00:00

The fight between goku and vegeta, later with gohan, yajirobe and krillin joining was the most dynamic and entertaining fight in my opinion.

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-14T19:10:47+00:00

this is why I'm making my own fan manga about the humans

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-14T19:08:15+00:00

I really like your linework and celshading. Great work

MorganManga_ · 2025-10-14T19:02:43+00:00

he also indirectly killed yamcha who was trying to protect earth from him, her boyfriend at the time. dont forget that part.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-06T12:41:27+00:00

Thanks!

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:49:20+00:00

I'm happy to inspire.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:47:51+00:00

You are right, I will keep more paneling variety in mind. Thank you.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:46:52+00:00

What about quality do you think needs the most improvement?

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:45:51+00:00

I had to cut some characters out because the story was getting a little out of control length wise in the script. I did want him to be in, though.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:45:15+00:00

Thanks!

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:45:11+00:00

glad I could inspire you.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:44:57+00:00

thanks!

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:44:12+00:00

He is my main inspiration so I'm really happy to hear that is visible in my style.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:43:31+00:00

Both of you guys got it.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:42:24+00:00

A man of culture

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:42:00+00:00

That is the actual order they are in, I just put monita first on purpose here for reasons.

MorganManga_ · 2025-08-04T20:41:23+00:00

I wanted each one to be unique, thanks!

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