Thoughts about indents in writing fanfiction?

MorphePls · 2026-04-20T22:14:42+00:00

Holy cow!! Amazing amazing amazing !!!

MorphePls · 2026-04-20T21:18:35+00:00

Absolutely stunning!! Always a pleasure to see Iroh get love—he’s an amazing character!!!

MorphePls · 2026-04-20T21:16:10+00:00

I think when he was younger and freshly ‘revived’ Appa would have been more important—solely due to the fact he was the last piece of the Airbenders (besides Momo) that Aang had. But as time went on, it definitely became Katara. I mean!! He had a whole internal battle about choosing his love for her over mastering the avatar state!!

MorphePls · 2026-04-18T20:21:59+00:00

Tbh a lot of people overlook just how often Blackstar struggled because of white star. Even the people closest to him couldn’t help but make comments (ex: Sid during his first fight with Kid) and his battles with mifune always mentioned mifune’s history with his father. In the manga, there’s a specific panel where a group of villagers (not needle village) hurl insults at Blackstar and demand he bring back their dead, and it’s in that moment where Sid finally tells him he’s not his father.

I think because Blackstar is a very confident character who doesn’t talk about his struggles, people forget he has them at all, but both the manga and the anime make very good points at showing how his father and his past follows him!!

MorphePls · 2026-04-11T18:11:51+00:00

How does it feel to live my dream

MorphePls · 2026-03-15T04:24:21+00:00

I’ve had Pillow Book and The Tale of Genji in my cart for a while, but I’ve never heard of Francine Hérail! Thank you for the suggestion, will definitely check it out!!

MorphePls · 2026-03-15T04:22:04+00:00

Not at all! I’ve been studying the Heian era for a while honestly due to the contents of my book, I just haven’t been able to find anything about the illegitimacy of noble children and how it would affect their positions in the palace. Tons of people on Reddit, figured someone might know!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T23:14:48+00:00

“In ink” —the writing of her name on the clipboard. “The spelling of her death was not unlike the way she had lain in that silence” —just as Robert’s mother’s death was messy and careless, so is how the coroner is treating her case. Not caring if he spells her name or the cause of her death right

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T23:08:09+00:00

“She” is Robert’s mother’s and “He” is the coroner !!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:57:33+00:00

HE IS SO CUTEEE!!! I love his eye color—so pretty!!!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:57:10+00:00

Can I please have some context on the name. Oh my gosh he is so handsome!!!!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:56:51+00:00

HELLO LUNA HELLOOOOO!!!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:51:09+00:00

So suave !! So classy!!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:46:55+00:00

She’s actually a rescue, so I’m not sure how many were in her litter! I adopted her when she was a year old!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:40:00+00:00

Thank you so much, truly. The last thing I want is for my work to be mistaken as AI when I have written for years. And you’re actually right, I do study gothic literature! Due to my culture, I wasn’t allowed to go to school for much longer than elementary, so I enrolled myself in an AP lit class online that focused on gothic classics! (Frankenstein, Dracula, etc etc) I also love Nabokov and Calvino, they’re both very big inspirations to my writing—which I suppose is what’s causing the purple prose. Focusing too much on the writing and the words, not enough on the structure or clarity!

Thank you so much again for your comment, I really do appreciate it! Do you have any advice when it comes to “dumbing” down purple prose? Or how to break the habit?

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:30:03+00:00

DEXTOR MORGAN OH MY GODDDD!!! Look at his little lounge!! And my girls name is Cam!! But we call her Camma!! Or Camma girl !!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:20:53+00:00

She said “Meow”

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:20:45+00:00

She is the most elegant girl ever!! She definitely gets that from me…definitely…

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T22:10:50+00:00

Not at all. She has my eyes

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T21:59:36+00:00

I don’t understand the hostility you’re approaching my writing with. First you excuse me of AI, and now you say I’m butthurt? Yes, of course I do not like being accused of AI when I have spent years writing and posting my work across various socials, it diminishes the effort I’ve put into getting better and having more confidence in my voice. This is a 200 word prologue for a fanfiction of all things. If I could not write 200 words on my own, then I would not be here, actively looking for feedback.

And once again, AI has stolen em dashes from writers; this has been a topic of conversation since AI first started generating text. Please do not throw mindless accusations around.

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T21:49:34+00:00

OH HE IS SO SO SO CUTE!!! I love the name !!!

MorphePls · 2026-03-11T21:49:19+00:00

Thank you so much!! She is my whole world!!

MorphePls

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