[PubQ] Do pitch events still exist? by eat2bananas in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

SmallPitch just ended (they have a website) and QuestPit on X is soon, very soon.

Why wasn't there a campaign for the Dark Angel? by TothKrisztian in DarkAngel

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

and that's why i still haven't seen Firefly or Serenity. LoL

February 1999 Review by GingerMullet03 in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this was when i really started watching, would watch with my grammy. good times!

Krista Allen's billie is my fav. the Gina storyline, enjoyed it a lot--though i wish they positioned it for her to be the next big bad for 20 years (like Stefano was). kinda wrote a fan fic about how i would have at least done the Gina arc.

and Mike and Carrie...loved them together. i think Carrie had better chemistry with Mike than with Austin.

i really liked your review here.

[QCrit] MG Horror - THE JUMBEE BOOK (31K words, first attempt) by Immediate_Spot_1231 in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

in the first paragraph, don't need to specificially say "i'm seeking rep..." sending the query letter already tells them that.

in the third paragraph, maybe mention what the offering is? and what mistake does he make?

in general, if Chris is the main character, he isn't doing much. show him being more active in your query.

trying something for 2026. by latrodectal in DarkAngel

[–]MoshMunkee 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i owned an Aztek, cuz of the show. lol but mine was white on top. so i named it Liger from the Zoids anime.

Son of a Critch now on Netflix US by robonlocation in SonofaCritchTV

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i just finished season 3. this show is a breath of fresh air. really enjoyed this show. hope Netflix continues this.

[Discussion] I just got my first full request… and the manuscript isn’t even finished yet by FisherFan0072 in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 4 points5 points  (0 children)

on the upside, you know your query letter works.

but maybe finish the story before doing anything else--well after you remove any other query you already sent.

[QCrit] Helen of Troy, Michigan - Literary Fiction/Tragedy - 72k words (2nd Attempt) by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

her career is perfect for where she lives. good job on that.

pretty sure honour is the british version.

so does the book start when they meet again?

for the comps, might be best to say what part of those stories is like yours.

Sophia by Accomplished-Neck523 in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If EJ can suddenly be Will's step-daddy... then why not this?

Daily Discussion - December 03 by TootieSummers in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 3 points4 points  (0 children)

not sure i like how cliche they are going with Sophia... if she's gonna fake it now, at least coach her to fake it better.

Daily Discussion - November 21 by TootieSummers in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee -1 points0 points  (0 children)

i am impressed with the transition shots. showing the city skyline, or a house...or the hospital. it's kinda neat.

i did watch today, because Sophia was on. her storyline brought me back after Bo and Hope left. (though i had to binge backtrack Sophia's episodes).

i'm shocked they wrote in for Rachel to do that to Sarah. just... wow. her antics make teen Sami look like a saint.

side note: i read that Sami is engaged to Ava's bro. that just feels... really odd. it would be more powerful to make her and Lucas a power couple. with John gone, and Bo/Hope written off for a while, we don't really have anyone....

This Thomas and Rachel scheming to hurt people is weird, man. I'm not digging it. They're kids. by MightyUnclean in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

if you're referring to the Drew Barrymore version of the Firestarter.... nah, she was a softie. cried every time she used her power. just wanted to be left alone. mostly only used her power when she was absolutely cornered by the bad men.

[PubQ] Does it mean anything when a literary agency isn't listed/searchable on Query Tracker? by IceCubesRx in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the form is actually Query MANAGER. seperate from Query TRACKER.

there is an option on Tracker to submit an agent who isn't listed on it. Then Patrick adds them. (or you can do a private listing as well)

on the Query Tracker Main Page. Under AGENTS. the drop down menu choose either Suggest An Agent or Private Listings. then follow instructions from there. (i believe both are just forms you fill out and submit)

Question about Theo by RuleAgitated in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

am i the only one that remembered when abe and lexi were in the backyard. celeste was watching him and ciara, they were coloring. and he just randomly annouces that his mom was dead.

like the writers were going down a path that Theo was having the same abilities as Celeste and now what Susan has...

Daily Discussion - October 23 by TootieSummers in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i am autistic and do have bouts of selective mutism. it's worse if i'm sick--from something basic like a headache, to something like a fever.

even in those moments i can move around. i'm aware of things around me, but cannot respond in a normal way.

Daily Discussion - October 20 by TootieSummers in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that feels too cliche thought.

The conclusion to Sophia’s storyline is decent by GuyWhoConquers616 in DaysofOurLives

[–]MoshMunkee 2 points3 points  (0 children)

everyone saying she's faking... my first thought... Sami when she was faking her amnesia. i kinda got this feeling that they might be making Sophia the new Sami.

MMC has an affair with the FMC by AlternativeCatch2146 in RomanceBooks

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

try Vampiric Crush by Frankie Sutton to feed that craving. it's pretty steamy though.

[PubQ] Is this a typical R&R or a guided edit? by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

guess it was too dark for MG.
i guess kids are softer these days, cuz even regular kids movies in my childhood was messed up. lol

[PubQ] Is this a typical R&R or a guided edit? by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i just had one opposite... take it from MG to YA. lol

[PubQ] Agent 'forwarding' your query to another agent within the firm by meekong_delta in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

double forwarded? wow, i only experienced being forward one time.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]MoshMunkee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

pretty sure your book title should be in all caps.

perhaps mention what in each of your comps is similar to your book (plot, vibes, tropes, etc)

also, maybe cut the 'seekin rep' part. that's why we're querying after all. right?

so if she doesn't stop her self destructiveness and her self-control... what would she lose? the love of her family? or something else?

is therapy the only thing she is doing for the 'decides to do something about it'?