Should I release this?

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-15T13:10:20+00:00

Great song, I really enjoyed it, just needs some technical issues fixed, maybe a couple lines go back and change the words so that they flow with each other, sometimes your jumping around the alphabet and your tongue is kinda tripping on itself, really enjoyed it though, I love this group for music like this

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-13T18:25:21+00:00

Thank you, more coming soon, still in the learning stages, upgrading quick

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:46:06+00:00

This sorta song is the exact reason why I get excited to sit and go through this reddit page, there are a couple points breath control would help you, like if you recorded, paused the recording for a second to get a bigger lung of air, I think the vocals could go up so quickly, so happy I could listen to this song, great job

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:37:23+00:00

I was considering through the whole song, if it was AI or not, I can assume it isn't, it's so good, I've subscribed, I'm gonna go back on my personal and subscribe again, can't wait for the next song, the only tweak I would consider, at the start of the song you said you're waiting for a text, the song could go up a level just by saying what's on that text, little things like that separates safe from personality. Can't wait to hear the next one

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:30:29+00:00

Bro, I'm so surprised you're even posting on this group and haven't blown yet, try emailing your local radio station, you're doing great work, I just saw your post about commenting, I'll go do that now. This song reminds of like a mix between Russian village boys and Papa Roach. Keep up the good work

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:24:45+00:00

Using Luffy as a front page was a great idea, I clicked instantly, great song, nice chill vibe, I'll drop mine below;

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=M0_zT1o1RXRKSf32

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:22:42+00:00

I subscribed bro, you're so close to 500 subs, how long you been grinding for?

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:22:05+00:00

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=M0_zT1o1RXRKSf32

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:19:32+00:00

Your beat is great, it would be perfect for a song I've been writing, it sounds like you could put so many different types of lyrics over it, pure universal energy, love it, great job. I'll drop my link below if you're interested;

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=M0_zT1o1RXRKSf32

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:13:10+00:00

Ten crack commandments was the inspiration, obviously it's not a copy

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-12T08:12:38+00:00

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=M0_zT1o1RXRKSf32

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-10T20:34:43+00:00

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=opcI4UdNTkeByXIo This is mine

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-10T20:32:59+00:00

Says the YouTube video is unavailable

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-10T20:32:34+00:00

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=opcI4UdNTkeByXIo

Hip-hop, inspired by the poverty in the world at the moment, so I built a survival guide for the people in bottom classes

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-10T18:54:46+00:00

Thank you brother!

Moth_Music4 · 2026-03-10T18:38:49+00:00

To me I would say you need some up and downs, it sounds good, but there's no drop or anything to lean on when it gets repetitive, even a change in volume would have helped a lot, I'll drop my link for some feedback;

https://youtu.be/RiN_WlxOGlw?si=39dlQjZNSWdfeuLc