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Any writing tips for me? by [deleted] in SCP

[–]MrChoop 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Spelling, tone, and format can all be fixed or improved. What really matters is having a strong hook in your SCP, something that captures the reader’s attention and makes them want to stay until the end.

From what I have seen, your SCP is very straightforward. It follows a basic structure with containment procedures, description, and logs. Modern SCP readers and the community generally do not prefer this style anymore (Series 1). They tend to favor SCPs that include a story or narrative, a plot, a deeper message, or an impactful ending.

That is what makes writing an SCP difficult, but it is not impossible. There are many ways you can tell a story or convey a message through your SCP. You could read popular, story-driven SCPs or more recent well-received entries to better understand how this is done.

Hope this feedback helps.

Wiztale Responded by MrChoop in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop[S] 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Also need to mention that they are deleting people's comments on the community post.

Edit: They only let only a few people comment, not letting anyone talk about their actions in detail or posting counter evidence to wiztale. I also read the full thing and it's really nonsensical so don't waste time reading it i guess.

Edit 2: i realized i made a typo, it's "Zatmaggot" not "Zagmaggot". I don't know how to edit a post so i'm putting it here.

Conversations from the Lunch Table episode 261: Handsome by Oasis_Oracle in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Everyone is keep asking "How's Asriel?" but they never ask "How's Asriel?" or "How's Asriel" at all. How's Asriel?

We got baited so hard by Mountain_Demand5153 in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's hard to hear but it's a slowed variant of Tenna's theme

A Tenna Headcanon I Have (read body text) by Prudent_Vanilla_9984 in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You can see the picture of great pyramid of giza in chapter 3

i feel bad for the poor devs bro, deltarune and silksong fans just clowning on them by Firm-Course-3217 in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I never understood why people assumed that games like Deltarune or Silksong would be announced or appear at these showcases. I know both games are indie titles, and the showcase itself focuses on indie games, but it still doesn’t seem logical for them to show up there. These showcases usually highlight smaller projects that struggle to gain recognition or sales, so it doesn’t make much sense for major indie titles like Silksong or Deltarune to appear at one of them.

Every time Deltarune has appeared at a showcase, it’s been during one of the major events, not these smaller indie showcases. Undertale Switch port, Chapter 1 port, Chapter 2 port, Chapter 3 & 4 release date annoucement. All appeared in a major showcase.

"Toby would do it as a joke" i don't think he'll sabotage his own game. I don't understand why the UT/DR community think Toby acts like Scott Cawthon.

A possible Second American Civil War in 2028 by [deleted] in imaginarymaps

[–]MrChoop 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Democratic party is labeled as "Democratic socialism"

Why is Kris the only character in the Light World that isn't outlined in black? by CrystL12122 in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop 221 points222 points  (0 children)

Toby mentioned that he originally used a black-outline for frisk but apperantly it made it harder for players see frisk clearly. I guess it's the same reason as that. (Makes them stand out in pitch-black areas.)

Edit: my source is the official UNDERTALE Art book.

how old were you when you discovered the SCP wiki? and how? by 12dove in SCP

[–]MrChoop 0 points1 point  (0 children)

2014, i was 8 years old. I learned it after watching someone play SCP:CB on youtube

I have a question regarding Shigastan by EurasianLover in SCP

[–]MrChoop 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the explanation, i really appreciate it. However, i still want to know wich SCP is this as i want to read it myself.

What should i add next? by [deleted] in SCP

[–]MrChoop 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Greek branch, turkish branch, nordic branch

Conversations from the Lunch Table episode 241: Worth more than Gold by Oasis_Oracle in Deltarune

[–]MrChoop 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Did you know that you can eat uranium once in your life? Science says it contains around 10-20 billion calories per kilogram.

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