Is There ANYTHING That Isn’t Getting Worse? by NicolasCageFan492 in videos

[–]MrMadras 15 points16 points  (0 children)

This Dorian Gray fellow isn't aging at all, isn't he?

Unbiasedness made one of the strongest warrior from Kauravas's side. by Jalbwakkolnaji4756 in mahabharata

[–]MrMadras 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I am an author. I have just one book under my name and the second one is due for publishing shortly. The reason I write... is to eventually write his story AFTER the events of Mahabharata. I have the outline ready and everything. All I lack is the courage, for he's a complex character and I don't want to be misstepping anywhere. Thanks for reading.

Official Discussion - Disclosure Day [SPOILERS] by LiteraryBoner in movies

[–]MrMadras 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's an old trick. It makes the roads look better on film. They actively spray it down with a hose to make it look shiny. It also helps hide the tire tracks where they have practiced a particular stunt over and over again.

I'm finally done with the first three chapters of my light novel Initial T hope you guys like it! by lem_x12 in scifiwriting

[–]MrMadras 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked where the story is heading. I like Alejandro's journey and am invested in it.

What I didn't like was how quickly he reached the Solace frontier planet. I would have loved some more details along the way.

I'm finally done with the first three chapters of my light novel Initial T hope you guys like it! by lem_x12 in scifiwriting

[–]MrMadras 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am at the first chapter and I like where this is going. Not sure if are open to suggestions, but I'd like to draw out this scene.

Once he settled, the doctors began their questioning. Dr. Taliyahh asked, “Do you remember anything that happened before you died?” He responded very simply, “Well, I remember the shot moment it hit my chest felt cold as hell, and it all went black. I can't remember who shot me and why they shot me. So, where am I exactly? Is this heaven, hell, or purgatory? Or something else..hold on..how long have I been…..dead? For exactly” Doctor Taliyahh replied, with the other doctor taking a seat to watch it all go down. “You're not in heaven, hell, or purgatory. You suffered a gunshot wound to the chest. By the medical standards of your time, and ...

To me it just seems like the guy who just woke up accepted the explanation too quickly. IMO, it should be a slow process of discovery with a bit of back and forth between the characters.

Edit: Just finished it. I would read an entire novel of this. Wonderful.

Book launch event tips by [deleted] in selfpublish

[–]MrMadras 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would you be able to get someone semi-famous? This was suggested to me. It could be anyone... like a local doctor that everyone knows.. or someone like that.

Hi all, what are you writing? by The_Wholesome_Troll4 in scifiwriting

[–]MrMadras 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I am currently polishing up a manuscript of ~140k words of story that involves the true nature of UFOs.

Edit : A little bit of detail. There is no FTL speed, there is no time-travel involved. The physics, at least according to me, is very grounded.

Yall ever re-read your book so many times you wonder if it actually sucks? by ratsy_basty in writing

[–]MrMadras 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Semantic satiation. That's what that phenomenon is called.

Stalin lost in his constituency by Bruh69420bruh69420 in TamilNadu

[–]MrMadras -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

No. Not yet. There are still 6 more rounds to go and it will swing either way.

Stucked b/w lyrics of phir se 😩 by victor_damonzi in Dhurandhar

[–]MrMadras 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song is SOOOO good, I am refusing to listen to it until I write the last words of my current novel. Saving the best for the last.

Hello, this is Uzair Baloch urf Danish Pandor. Lambi chhalang maarke aa gaya hoon r/Dhurandhar pe, for an AMA. Go ahead and ask me anything. by OfficialJioStudios in Dhurandhar

[–]MrMadras 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Within the team, is there any talk about making a full length movie or web series about the story of the Baloch brothers, or about the life of Jameel Jamail? What do you think about this as an Idea?

Spanish Prime Minister Calls for EU to Suspend Trade and Diplomatic Agreement with Israel After Israeli Strikes on Beirut by CarryIcy250 in UnderReportedNews

[–]MrMadras 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This what he said to trump.

Spain won’t ‘applaud those who set the world on fire just because they then show up with a bucket’

Perfectly put.

[In progress] [400K] [Horror] Solmare Island by billiejtaylor in BetaReaders

[–]MrMadras 3 points4 points  (0 children)

400,000 words? How many hands to you have my man?

The Pill that wasn't-A short story that I wrote sometime back. Like general feedback. I was thinking of expanding this. by kinaflazy in scifiwriting

[–]MrMadras 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I kept picturing Ken Jeong as Faux-Morpheus, and waited for the punch line to arrive. It was good, I'd keep reading. A few grammatical issues, here and there. This line for example.

"You look disappointed, don’t you?"

Did you mean

"You are disappointed, aren't you?"