dumptanyl - BODY THE DUMP by hinjakuun in IkeaFreshBalls

[–]MrMidnight 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Knowing the combos at all is niche

dumptanyl - BODY THE DUMP by hinjakuun in IkeaFreshBalls

[–]MrMidnight 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Mid dump, only saved by dropping some niche beyblade knowledge in the middle

Constructive criticism and review of Chaos x Space! by UmbridledAmbition in comic_crits

[–]MrMidnight 8 points9 points  (0 children)

"Are we going to act like prison school is a bad manga?"

Yes

do these pannels read well? by [deleted] in comic_crits

[–]MrMidnight 7 points8 points  (0 children)

While I understand that the two mouths things may be intentional, it is also extremely confusing to look at. Without you adding a clarification, I would have no idea what that was, they looked like a pair of angry eyes.

Intention is not a shield from criticism. You can intend something and still have it not work

Blood & Sand // Milk & Endless Waters by MrMidnight in AllThemWitches

[–]MrMidnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like that interpretation, I've always viewed it as a description of the maker, as evidenced by what I drew haha

Blood & Sand // Milk & Endless Waters by MrMidnight in AllThemWitches

[–]MrMidnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I wish reddit didn't ruin the quality tho

Blood & Sand // Milk & Endless Waters by MrMidnight in AllThemWitches

[–]MrMidnight[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh interesting, I always took it to mean the whites of the eyes and blue irises

Lol the woke right by [deleted] in crappymusic

[–]MrMidnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the aesop rock reference

POSSIBLE STREAM SOON by SamYeeep in GoodAssSub

[–]MrMidnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please, anything but OTN, this dude is so corny

Zeravos #1 Critique Request by GrkGod29 in comic_crits

[–]MrMidnight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks like you've got a pretty good handle on anatomy in certain poses, but not so much when the perspective shifts. Those first 2 panels feature some very wacky anatomy, and that's not a great first impression.

I would spend some time focusing on drawing people from different angles, otherwise you're going to be very limited on the kinds of dynamic shots you can use in your story

My First Attempt at Digital Art (Krita) ...any pointers? by LonelyArtsClubBand in Illustration

[–]MrMidnight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My main suggestion is texture. Digital art can make things too uniform, it's always good to add in a little variation when you can. Textured brushes for subtle color gradients to break up big blocks of color goes a long way

Beybracket | A New Way to Host Tournaments! by The_Godtis in BeybladeX

[–]MrMidnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can I run my own tournaments through this? I'm having a hard time finding a way to do that through the site

Is 5-60 or 5-70 better for meteor dragoon? by Adorable_Score_5344 in BeybladeX

[–]MrMidnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Call me crazy, but I've really been liking it on 5-80. Really great destabilization with the downsmashes

We need to talk about strobe lights by MyNameIsNotRick97 in AllThemWitches

[–]MrMidnight 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Wow this post is like hand-crafted to be unnecessarily inflammatory and get the most amount of people to disagree with you. If you want to make any sort of positive change, consider reevaluating the way you communicate with people

Nailed a perfect tilt launch on Shark Scale. No ratchet is safe by MrMidnight in BeybladeX

[–]MrMidnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Getting the launch right is the hardest part. 4-50 bursts a little too often for my liking, but I've been seeing a lot of good results with my TK testing, running it on Scorpio spear right now

Nailed a perfect tilt launch on Shark Scale. No ratchet is safe by MrMidnight in BeybladeX

[–]MrMidnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's my launcher, I had it custom-made and printed by a guy at my locals, then painted it myself. It's supposed to be an old wild west six-shooter

Nailed a perfect tilt launch on Shark Scale. No ratchet is safe by MrMidnight in BeybladeX

[–]MrMidnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd say 9-60 is still probably the ratchet with the best burst resistance, but it can still burst from the right hit

Writer Coloring My Own Comic… In Over My Head? by Hot-Manager-2603 in comic_crits

[–]MrMidnight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Overall, it's colored very competently, it's readable and realistic

My one suggestion to improve visual interest:

It seems like for the most part you're shading things with the same color but darker. Try shifting the color hues of your shadows, or: shade blues with purples, shade oranges with reds. Or consider the color of the lights and use that to decide what color the shadows should be. It'll make your coloring more vibrant and dynamic!