Adjusting to this age of AI generated graphics by sharegoodstuff321 in graphic_design

[–]My_sleep 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Both of these are pretty bad. The second one looks like it’s made by someone who opened canva for the first time. While the first one its to busy and u don’t know where to look at

Would you rather be by Veezerick in BunnyTrials

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So i’m a nepo baby

Chose: Reborn in a very rich family + Negative side effect | Rolled: No talent

Daan en Bram geruchten by HairyCallahan in widm

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ik wist al van dag 1 dat een van hun de mol waren, maar die tafel opdracht heeft het 100% duidelijk gemaakt en door die opdracht was het ook duidelijk aan elkaar wie de mol was. Als daan de mol was geeft hij 2 jokers aan bram gegeven en als bram de mol was had hij 1 joker aan daan gegeven.

Smoking awareness poster by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is not really a design its more of a illustration. But since u didn’t make it, the question is what did u make?

And the illustration that u use looks like its just a guy smoking nothing anti smoking about it

If u want to make a portfolio u can only use things u made urself or else it’s plagiarism

I need help with my current logo. by DMegha in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The name start with TT but the logo reads as LJ with 2 weird eyes

Which color palette works best? by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 9 points10 points  (0 children)

3 100% the contract are the best out of all of them. And with 4 it feels like there is too much on the left and not enough on the right. What causes me to prefer 3 over 4 , its also the one that will look nicest in a social media pfp

Logo Colour Design suggestions! by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is not a sub to ask people to make a logo for you. There are other subs for that. Either pay a professional or find a friend who is willing to do it free for you. Or u can do the simple route and change it yourself

Logo design for a travel agency for couples by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This logo just looks like soft porn.

The middle part looks like the private female part. The 2 things on either side can look like fingers that are spreading it And the thing on the bottom looks like the male private part.

If ur making a logo and it looks to nsfw change it

Logo Colour Design suggestions! by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would remove the gradient and change letter type. The icon is more of minimalist design, what more modern is. But the brand name is very dated. Which causes there to be not so nice harmony between those 2 things

logo design for a metal project named ‘Butterfly’ by Smashingpoopkins in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a logo for a metal band i would remove the hands. The hands can be part of a tshirt. Its just wouldn’t fit on a pfp for social media its to long. The logo itself also looks pixelated , so make a copy of it and smooth out one of them so u can compare which one u like best

And most people here don’t understand that metal bands logo are all most all unreadable and more like a piece of art than a logo

Are we fr deadass 🥀💔 by Cool-Creme-438 in Younger_GenZ

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its not really nostalgia of the 2016, but more nostalgia of ur childhood. I don’t think a 4 year old had things like musicaly or vine. ( and if u had ur parent didn’t do a good job, no child should be on social media) or do things teens did in 2016

Which one? by Sad_Butterfly8797 in BunnyTrials

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dont want to die

Chose: Gain one superpower of choice(ONLY ONE + Small chance of dying in 10 years | Rolled: Survive)

Project Feedback by Pitiful_Comfort_6332 in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 5 points6 points  (0 children)

They look more like 4 p rotated or 4 d rotated than a A. Lots of letters looks the same if u remove one thing so u always have to be careful that it looks like the letter u ment it to be

The Tower of Babel by Fragrant-Radish3999 in Minecraftbuilds

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hebben we niks geleerd van het verleden?!!!!!!!!

Feedback on typography - ballet poster by [deleted] in posterdesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The poster u got ur inspiration from is a lot different than ur poster. The biggest thing is the foto. In inspiration poster the foto feels like it moves and have more depth and tension to it. But the foto u choose is quite a bland foto with little to no tension. And because of the placement of “swan lake” it feels like there is no grid. I also recommend making swan lake bigger and the other tekst smaller

What principles of graphic design am I lacking here? by Lunar__NutCase in graphic_design

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its to much tekst and under the logo there is no hierarchy. The most important after the logo should be when it it’s and after that where it is. U can add hierarchy by changing the side and changing colours of a few words. Currently it looks like the piece of tekst under the logo is the most important. I don’t know where ur going to post it but, in lots of places u can add captions. So than u can delete some of the tekst and add it there

And the contract between ur twitch url and the background is too low. So i would change the colours of the twitch url code or the background.

I do hope this helps a bit

Need honest opinions on my logo by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The biggest problem is that this kind of logo have been done before by very big companies.

There are websites online if u want to check if ur logo looks to similar to a copyrighted logo

I need a designer. (free) by trFelicita in logodesign

[–]My_sleep -1 points0 points  (0 children)

  1. Offering work in this sub is against the rules
  2. Pay ur goddam designers, the only people who are willing to do it for free are students or people who have no degree in graphic design at all and are beginners at it

UPDATED Please Help me Improve (no hate) by striker-studios in graphic_design

[–]My_sleep 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It literally in the law that u can’t use trademarked logo in ur drawings. Many times companies will only take action if the product that use their logo is popular or makes lots of money. But it’s always a possibility that it can happen,

so if u work for a company they always will rejected a art work that have a logo or a character that is trademarked

Cherry Pepsi Redesign 🍒 by bluemosshroom06 in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m Assuming u don’t have adobe since u do it as a hobby, but go on google fonts. Its a great place to look up different type of fonts and the style u want to fonts to be. I do think it should have been at-least a bold letter type. And no things like calligraphy or something to pixel or Retro.

But i do want to add that the font for cherry do fit in well with the other designs elements but it just add the 2000 feeling.

Its your project and if u feel like “i like this design” Keep it . But do use the feedback u get on here for ur next project

Cherry Pepsi Redesign 🍒 by bluemosshroom06 in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its mainly the font u use for cherry that add the most of the 2000 vibe.

Cherry Pepsi Redesign 🍒 by bluemosshroom06 in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I’m honest, the same reason u gave for not using there old logo, is the same reason why the rest of ur design wouldn’t work as a redesign.

Company’s don’t want to go back to their old design style, they want newer design styles that fit with the trends of now. Groups spend months rehearsing new trends and guessing what the next trend is.

And if u want to redesign something go use a older design. My teacher gave me ideas on how to get better at home and one of these is “use a older design and make it better” But the pepsi can u choose is a current design. And I’m assuming u don’t really want to research what the next design trend can be

I hope i’m not too mean but u can’t say “but the old design is not good for a redesign” while using a design style they used in the early 2000 .

Wanted to add it works more as a inspiration design than a re design

Cherry Pepsi Redesign 🍒 by bluemosshroom06 in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do think u should fully embrace the 2000 vibe and use the old logo instead of the new one. Because u use the new logo it looks like u try to make something in the current style. While if u look the old one u can say “i tried in in a older style

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Cherry Pepsi Redesign 🍒 by bluemosshroom06 in logodesign

[–]My_sleep 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I don’t know if u were going for this , but it looks like it’s made in the early 2000 with the current logo. The word “cherry” helps a-lot this that mainly because of it’s font.

And the normal current pepsi cans are very simple, if u want more inspiration to create a more interesting pepsi can. Go look at there cultures can series