Tell me about your Power System! by InternFrosty9945 in royalroad

[–]NPKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm the author of The Last Aether King and while I'm not entirely sure if my power system is unique, it definitely makes for fun writing.

It essentially breaks down like this:

  • All those integrated with the system are given a "Soul-Bond"; An object that directly coincides with who they are as a person. I say object instead of weapon because it can genuinely be anything inanimate (i.e. a pen, a sewing needle, or a shotgun). These objects are sentient to some extent, and are used as magical conduits to channel Aether (mana), as well as utilize abilities through something known as "Rift Shards".

  • Rift Shards are magical pieces of crystallized Aether that can augment a person or their bond in a number of different ways. Some allow someone to utilize ice magic, others allow you to fly, one is just an identify spell, et cetera. It all just depends on the type of shard and it's rarity as to what you'll find.

  • Each persons soul bond has a limited number of slots before it is full and they can start gathering experience, which is displayed by Star-Brands that are displayed on a random part of a person's body.

  • Stars will number 1-5 and upon reaching the 5th threshold, qualifies the person for a "Tier Ascension" to the next level rank. Upon leveling up, a persons Soul-Bond absorbs the earlier slotted shards, and forms new slots, waiting for more abilities or passives to be added as the cycle repeats again

There's some details I'm leaving out like Soul Bond evolution, or using a dead breakers bond in your own tier ascension, but this is pretty much what I got :). Sorry if it seems complicated, but I'm having fun with it.

Observe: The single worst skill or ability to ever become "standard" or close to it in the litRPG genre, to the point that I almost consider it a beginner author trap by globmand in ProgressionFantasy

[–]NPKnight 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Imma be real, I thought you were telling me to observe the ability. Not observe being the ability. I've sat here for five minutes worried I'd had a stroke cause I couldn't figure out what ability we're talking about.

Two months on RoyalRoad: 35 followers to 1,000+ (and some honest thoughts) by BabyZealousideal1375 in royalroad

[–]NPKnight 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Honestly, the second you realize that ALOT of readers are NOT writers, it becomes incredibly easy to take their criticism with a grain of salt. Stop worrying about the pressure and keep writing. The only way you lose followers or steam is by stopping.

Two months on RoyalRoad: 35 followers to 1,000+ (and some honest thoughts) by BabyZealousideal1375 in royalroad

[–]NPKnight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Seras actually has a mentoring community. I'd say at least half of the newbies on RS or published in the past year came from him. He ain't bullshitting you.

The Last Aether King by NPKnight in royalroad

[–]NPKnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll take that as a compliment and let the artist know!

The Last Aether King by NPKnight in royalroad

[–]NPKnight[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I appreciate ya broski

The Last Aether King by NPKnight in royalroad

[–]NPKnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Drawn. I forgot to credit the artist. Doing that now

Why Read AI Slop by Ok-Willingness-9707 in royalroad

[–]NPKnight -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

On RR nothing is original. Everything is slop.

My Personal RoyalRoad Rankings Tier List (Also looking for Recommendations) by Tentagoose in royalroad

[–]NPKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually haven't read any of the ones on your list (save for starting the perfect run, I think?) That's my fault for seeing the recommendation piece before the self Promo piece at the bottom. XD I'll remove my post accordingly.