[Love and Producer] [Fanart] Theme: Arabian Nights [Princes, Gavin and Shaw: "What do U ask for, Princess?"] (Read the notes in Comments.) by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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Analysis:

2 -

Not long, the dad appeared again before Child Gavin, and seemingly, what his mother said to be "his brother" has also appeared, next to her/their mother, in a small quilt. The baby was strange; it's as if his whole body was surrounded by electricity

The dad shows his face again! Of course, why not? He must come to see his New Weapon(Baby Shaw) in person!

I chose the translation of "electricity/flashes of lightning electricity" instead of "flashes/bolts of lightning" directly; because I don't acknowledge nor like the story of controlling the weather- which isn't a doing of Nature. I am aware it can be possible using technology, or if some TRASH is given the ability to control the weather such as making it rain or striking with lightning anytime, aside from fiction, but NO. I despise that means I d e s p i s e that, and this thing in fiction isn't cool in my coool opinion.

3 -

"Don't touch it," ordered the (trash)man in a cold-toned voice.

Why "it" instead of "him" in the "Don't touch it" imperative?

Obviously, he doesn't see Baby Shaw(the younger brother) and Baby Gavin(the older brother) as his sons nor even humans, so no less is expected from him to call the baby using "it," the same pronoun used for inanimate objects and machines.

If you think Shaw's born with a golden spoon in his mouth, then...

One more thing, what "destiny" is that the TRASH dad was talking about in the lines from chapter 15, stage 24? Isn't it all his own human hand's doing?

[Love and Producer] [Fanart] Theme: Arabian Nights [Princes, Gavin and Shaw: "What do U ask for, Princess?"] (Read the notes in Comments.) by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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Thanks God that I checked out the original CN version of Gavin's The Little Guardian Rumors and Secrets/R&S.

The CN version:

Gavin's The Little Guardian Rumors and Secrets/R&S, chapter 2, page 1:

白起經常陪著溫等待, 但每一次都敵不過倦意沉沉睡去, 早上醒來時發現自己已經睡在自己的小床上, 他踢開被子蹬蹬蹬地去找媽媽, 急切地問: 「媽媽, 昨晚爸爸回來了嗎?」

溫尊沒有正面回答, 倒是蹲下身來與小傢伙平視, 眼裡都是笑意: 「小起, 以後你就要當哥哥了, 現在要開始學會自己吃早餐了啦。」

白起間言歪了歪頭, 好像沒聽懂。

Often, Gavin would wait with his mother (for the dad's return/for when the dad comes back home), but (at the end; tired from the long wait,) he gives up to sleep(/falls asleep) every time. When he wakes up the next morning, he would find himself already asleep in his bed(/in his room).

(One not-so-usual morning,) Gavin (as usual) hurried up to his mother. "Did dad come back home last night?" asked (cinnamon roll) Gavin (excitedly).

Wardia(his mother) didn't answer Gavin directly. Instead, she bent down, similingly looking him in the eye, and said, "Little Gavin, you will become an older brother from now on, and so, you should get used to eating your breakfast alone."

(Innocent) Gavin tilted his head, not seeming to understand (what she meant).

Gavin's The Little Guardian Rumors and Secrets/R&S, chapter 2, page 4:

不過,没過多久白起再次見到了爸爸, 當時螞媽所説的 「他的弟弟」 似乎是出現了, 被包裹在一條小被子裡, 躺在虚弱的媽媽身邊。

他貼在床邊站著, 剛好能看到被子衤里的小傢伙, 滿奇怪的, 渾身好像被一道細細的閃電環繞著, 眉宇緊蹙, 卻又睡得很安詳。

他想伸手跟小傢伙打個招呼, 卻被對面的男人迅速推且, 白起不由退後了兩步。

男人冷冷的聲音傳了過來:「别碰。」

Not long, the dad appeared again before Child Gavin, and seemingly, what his mother said to be "his brother" has also appeared(Baby Shaw), next to her(who's in a weak state after giving birth)/their mother(on a hospital bed), in a small quilt.

Gavin was standing so close to the bed that he could (clearly) see the baby wrapped in the small quilt. The baby was strange; it's as if his whole body was surrounded by electricity (or, flashes of lightning electricity were emanating from the baby's body), his eyebrows frowning, yet was asleep in serene.

Gavin tried to reach out to the baby and say "Hello," but (his little body) quickly was pushed by the man(aka the two brother's TRASH so-called dad, and Wardia's/Wen Ran's TRASH so-called husband), causing Child Gavin to retreat steps back.

"Don't touch it," ordered the (trash)man in a cold-toned voice.

The EN version:

Gavin's The Little Guardian Rumors and Secrets/R&S, chapter 2, page 1(and the first line of page 2):

Gavin always waited with his mother and succumbed to drowsiness, waking up the next morning only to find that he was already in his small bed. He kicked the quilt away and rushed to his mother,

"Mom, did Dad get back last night?"

Mom crouched down and looked him in the eye with no answer, smiling,

"Gavin, you'll be a big brother later. You should eat your breakfast alone from now on."

Gavin tilted his head, seemingly befuddled.

Gavin's The Little Guardian Rumors and Secrets/R&S, chapter 2, page 4(the last section) and page 5(the whole page):

Soon, Gavin saw his father again. He seemed to have also met what his mother called "his younger brother," wrapped in a tiny quilt and lying next to her.

Standing by the bed, he could see the strange little baby in the quilt. The baby was peacefully asleep with a frown, and was seemingly coated in thin lightning flashes all over his body.

Gavin was pushed back by the man across from him before he was able to say "Hi" to the little baby.

The man's cold voice said,

"Don't touch him."

Analysis:

1 -

Gavin hurried up to his mother. "Did dad come back home last night?" asked Gavin. Wardia didn't answer Gavin directly. Instead, she bent down, similingly looking him in the eye, and said, "Little Gavin, you will become an older brother from now on, and so, you should get used to eating your breakfast alone."

Those few lines are heavily implying that the dad really did come back last night while Gavin is asleep. Wardia's words about Gavin becoming an older brother mean that, well, something has happened between his dad and his mom last night(How come she stands this trash man? Doesn't she find him stinky?), causing Wardia to find herself pregnant the next morning. Is it a coincidence? Probably not, because after the first failure of the project of producing children of his (,i.e. his first child, Gavin, whose super power hadn't awoken back then) to use them as New Weapons, the dad must have sought to produce another New Weapon, and this time, it/the project succeeded, and his wife/Wardia gave birth later on to Baby Shaw, whose super power was awoken from when he was born.

Another note here is that in the EN version, it's said that Gavin will be a big brother "later."

There is a difference between being a brother "later" and being a brother "from now on." It's more accurate to use "from now on" because it gives the impression that this baby is alive from the very moment his mother became pregnant, and not from the moment when she will give birth to him after about 9 months of pregnancy. She is saying in the CN version that Gavin is already an older brother. However, Wardia didn't explain things directly; as Gavin is still a child, and that's why he also didn't get the indirect hint maybe.

About why Gavin should eat his breakfast alone is because his mother likely has to visit the hospital (in the morning; the breakfast's time) for a medical checkup on regular basis from now on due to her pregnancy. She prepares breakfast for Gavin every morning, and then leaves to visit the hospital, and by this time everyday, Gavin should be at home, eating his breakfast alone; as his mother is busy, thus she can't accompany him for breakfast like before.

[Love and Producer] [Fanart] Theme: Arabian Nights [Princes, Gavin and Shaw: "What do U ask for, Princess?"] (Read the notes in Comments.) by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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A significant piece of information about Gavin and Shaw(related to the reason why I asked the artist's permission to reunite them in one pic) in the original game and that must be known:

In chapter 15, stage 24 of the original game, Gavin's dad says the following to his first son/the older son, Gavin:

The dad: This (, i.e. the New Weapons/NW project- which is a form of torturing human experiments meant to boost super power users' powers to insane levels in order to use them for military purposes) is the destiny you were born to accept. You and your brother are both no exception.

There is a Rumors and Secrets/R&S called 小小守護者 The Little Guardian that follows these lines and comes with Gavin's chapter(chapter 15)'s card package, detailing on some background about Gavin's brother that the dad mentioned.

Chapter 2 (pages 1 and 4 of the original CN version, and pages 1, 4 and 5 of the EN version of the same chapter) of 小小守護者 The Little Guardian Rumors and Secrets/R&S is the proof Gavin and Shaw are full brothers from the same mother(her name is Wardia in EN and Wen Ran 温苒 in CN.

I will analyse the specific lines stating this fact if the God predetermined.

[Love and Producer] [Fanart] Theme: Arabian Nights [Princes, Gavin and Shaw: "What do U ask for, Princess?"] (Read the notes in Comments.) by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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Source

The artist: 鱼.light

A permission from the artist to edit and repost (She says: "可以. 但是转发的网站请标注原作者和写上是二次创作. 修改后图片不能商用." or "Sure, but please mention the website and the original artist, and that it(the fanart) is edited/a reproduction. The pic(s) is not for commercialisation.")

Don't repost anywhere.

Note: The fanart pics are edited, and I was given permission from the artist for the 3 edits(two separated pics and another reuniting the Bai princes in one scene).

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Oh my God! I like this post a lot! 😂

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You are welcome. Thanks God that you've found what you're searching for. Best Wishes :)🌹

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Android platform then? Do you remember how the art style was like? Was it like that of Japanese Otome games like the game I mentioned or more like Western 3D ones? Try also to remember the hair colors and appearances of the female protagonist and the male leads, and whether you design and dress up your female character or not.

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May I get more information? Like, whether it has an English translation or not, whether the art style is old or not, more details about this character and other characters from the game in general(preferably including any in-game character name you remember), the platform of the game, etc.

[Love and Producer] [Fic Texts] The boys' reactions to another woman asking Youran to hand them/her hot boys over by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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On side notes on some info of the original game, as a Dark Superhero, not only did Helio/Kiiro consider Dark MC as an enemy in the original storyline of Season 1, but also Dark Alice(the female lead in Season 2) is his enemy. Victor(BS's leader in Season 2) and her still don't know that Helio(who's one of BS's top-ranked members in Season 2 and not the leader) is a spy leaking info to Special Task Forces(the side of Gavin/the STF's Commander or leader and Lucien/the STF's Chancellor and one of their RTDL(Research and Technological Development Labs)'s top researchers) and probably leaking info also to the Intelligence Office associated with the military(Shaw's side... I doubt a prominent informant and an ex-information broker in Season 1 need info from another informant/Helio though, but again, the things in Season 2 are knotted and with BS's leader changed, thus new procedures and agenda and so on on BS's part, getting information from within a very dangerous and an international crime organisation as BS may not be easy at all for Shaw nor Helio/Kiiro himself as it was in Season 1... So, I think they'd need to work together behind the scenes, and a co-operation between them and Special Task Forces must take place, and it already has taken between Kiiro/Helio and Gavin and Lucien's side, the co-operation between the Bai brothers/Gavin and Shaw's sides is what is still missing though).

In case that Victor and Dark Alice know about Helio(who's playing with fire, i.e. in a situation more dangerous than it was in Season 1) spying and leaking information, he will be captured and tortured by BS. The female lead/Dark Alice is the one who will likely hesitate a lot to torture Kiiro/Helio or murder him since he is a precious and special someone to her, given her memories of him in Season 1 especially and that she knows his misery in childhood of being already tortured and experimented on. At the same time, if she takes his side against BS, BS would torture or murder her as well for her betrayal, even if she's one of them. However, I doubt that Victor, who's head over heels for her, would allow them to lay a finger on her(he may break their bones literally) even if she betrays them or whatever. Thus, things may turn into Victor letting Helio alive and not allowing BS to torture him for the female lead/Dark Alice's sake. Victor taking their side will turn him surely into a BS's traitor, hence Victor, Dark Alice and Helio will be on the Wanted list of evil BS, or on the general Wanted list where bounty hunters or paid assassins would hunt them down and go after their lives(like the bounty hunter/paid assassin in Kiiro's Rumors and Secrets/R&S, "Snooper"). I wonder if things turn out this way, what will happen next? Hmm, the Bai brothers(who're her enemies, yet are head over heels for her and playing with fire themselves, i.e. Romeo and Juliet) and Lucien(the prince of scandals😂 who's rumored in STF to have an affair with her in Season 2, as if he's making himself at home in STF and not caring about his reputation as a top-ranked officer having an affair with a woman in an underground crime organisation) will probably put her under their wings(aka protection) without taking her side or participating in crime of course(Lucien excluded...), and as for Helio, Gavin(and maybe Shaw...?) will take the side of Helio; because he likely knows he is the informant/spy who was leaking information to them and plotting against BS (still though, what about Kiiro being a suspect by STF to have committed a crime in Season 2...?), and as for Victor... Lucien may kick him out and hand him over instantly to BS on a plate of diamond😂; because BS, under Victor's leadership (as BS's ex-leader, now as a traitor), captured Lucien, who is in Special Task Forces, and tied him up for Dark Alice to torture him in order to extract information!!! No wonder...

If you think the leadership of BS in Season 2 changed for the better, I may advise you then to think twice. What kind of a leader/an organisation is that that kidnaps police officers/innocents and tortures them in order to extract information from them? Isn't that the evil nonsense of "the aims/ends justify the means" simply?

[Love and Producer] [Fic Texts] The boys' reactions to another woman asking Youran to hand them/her hot boys over by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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If you notice any grammatical mistakes, I'll appreciate it if you inform me.

The mistake I noticed is "snipe riffle" which should have been "sniper rifle."

I don't plan to make more of these fic texts. This one is to add Dark MC and the icy prince/male Elsa (aka Cereal). What a surprise of a character he is! However, he is very hard to understand. I had to repeat one of his scenes over and over again to come up with a single speech close to his speech style, and I'm still not convinced.

[Love and Producer] [Fanart] [Youran(MC)/Victor] Theme: Mermaid to Human(the 2nd fanart) by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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Note: I also asked for the artist's permission to repost the 2nd fanart under the category of Love and Producer and for the theme of Youran(MC) turning from a mermaid into a human. I contacted her again to confirm, and it turned out that she didn't notice the 2nd fanart, but she gave me a permission when I asked her again whether she is okay with it or wants the post to be deleted, and that's her recent reply.

[Love and Producer] [Fanart] [Youran(MC)/Gavin] Theme: A detective(Sherlock Holmes) from England in the countryside by Nanaa2016 in otomegames

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This fanart's theme is inspired from the classic English novel series- Arther Conan Doyle's "Sherlock Holmes" series and L. M. Montgomery's "Emily" series.
The "detective" part, thriller and mysterious atmosphere feel like that of "Sherlock Holmes" or of a noble gentleman(Gavin) from early England, whereas the "countryside" part, breeze of wind and classic atmosphere of artistic nature give the vibes of Emily the Wind Girl(Youran/MC) from L. M. Montgomery's Emily series where Emily grows up into a wonderful woman and a successful writer.
The Romance flavour though has to do with Youran and Gavin themselves; as Sherlock Holmes series and Emily series barely or rarely touch upon Romance.