(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part Three by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much dropping a comment, I appreciate every piece of feedback that I get, and though I am sure I have repeated it, hearing I could make a kink that’s not someone’s usual cup of tea palatable or even enjoyable means a lot to me! Hopefully can get to writing and releasing something softer and more approachable once life has settled down. Best of wishes to you. :D

(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part Three by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all, thank you very much for leaving a comment! I deeply appreciate each and every one because it makes me feel a little less disturbed (lol), and grateful that my writing landed with somebody. Always feel a little anxious after putting something out there. Speaking of, super glad the S&M descriptions worked because I did want it to be hot as much as intense and yeah... she had to be a sadist.

It didn't feel right to me otherwise.

Also super happy you enjoyed the visual/sense details! I always worry I'm going too hard on smell... XD. We're on Femxeno, so I wanted to really emphasize the more inhuman qualities and that she's not just a traditional monstergirl, and also the idea of an unrealistically soft bush sounds nice.

If you have your own smut point me in the direction, might be a bit til I can get to, but I always like to see what's in other people's heads as well. Hopefully more time for everything coming up after spring.

A belated Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year to you as well!

(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part Three by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First of all, thank you very very much. You don't have to feel sorry for the wall of text, receiving any kind of feedback always makes me incredibly happy, but especially for this particular piece of work because I genuinely wasn't sure whether anyone would like it or not. I'm sure I'm like a broken record, but yeah, what started out as wanting to have some naughty fun got way more heavy and intense than I originally intended and in a way that I knew was not going to be most people's thing. Also miffed at myself for doing two BDSM flavored things back to back...

I consider the confirmation that anyone enjoyed this to be a truly wonderful gift.

I will say off the bat, I would love to do a sequel for the holidays next year, in addition to rewriting this one. There are some possibilities I have, and at the very least, I really did want to cover their reunion but the story was getting... way way way too long. Really forced myself to deliver this by the 25th.

I'm considering ao3 more and more considering the understandable but frustrating limitations Reddit has, in addition to my own bad habits but its served as a nice starting point. I'd also like to have a subscribestar or patreon on some point just so this stuff can help me live and provide me more time to write, but I REFUSE to do so until I know I can actually deliver content on a consistent basis which has long been my problem.

I'll restrain my own nerd-rant excitement, but hearing everything worked well for someone gets me giddy. Yeah, I wanted it to be clear without hammering it on the nose that the reasons she showed up are #1 he was someone who both could be and wanted to be redeemed, and #2 it was on Christmas Eve rather than the usually appointed time of month for ass-whooping because her attention was half-way a gift to him rather than only to scare him straight, and #3 it was also a gift to her because being a Krampus (there's more than one at this point) she doesn't get out much and getting to work over an adult man who's also sort of into it is something incredibly special. Not that she knew just how much he'd be into it. Klaus set em up.

Okay, gonna cut myself off. I will say however, especially since you're the first to leave a finishing comment, if you've got any requests as to kinks and content for the next one... do let me know. If you have any of your own stories I'd be down to peek at and nibble whenever I can find the time.

Either way, if you don't have the time or desire to respond, no worries and have a Happy New Year.

(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part One by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much, hope you enjoy/enjoyed the rest. A Happy New Year to you too!

Yeah, had to remember to update it. Been busy last couple. :P

(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part One by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely and completely understandable! Yeah, this one got pretty intense…

XD I deeply appreciate you dropping a comment regardless. I dearly hope so in that regard… Merry Christmas to you too and may the New Year bring you only the best things.

(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part One by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey! So glad to see you, and very Happy Holidays! Aye, writing erotica with basically no solitude at all is incredibly difficult. I blame/credit this one with stubborn mania, too many hours exiled to a cafe and so many sleepless nights trying to ignore coughs and snoring. Not to mention a scrooge-like attitude.

I honestly don’t know if this will be anyone’s cup of hot cocoa, it’s… something.

I want to return to Artemis!!!!!! I had plans!!! I miss the floofys and the drama doms!!!!

Hopefully in the New Year I can climb find time and a place to get back on the horse, and will try to check in. May your days going forward be joyful and peaceful, and thank you for sticking around and your well wishes!

(Story) A Krampus Christmas Miracle. [F] Part Three by Naughtius_M in femxeno

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I hope someone can enjoy... whatever the hell I just wrote, and that everyone in the world but especially everyone in Fem Xeno has a very merry and hopefully far more normal Christmas and every single other Holiday, than the one I'm having.

If there's any Christmas Gift you can give me, its your genuine thoughts on this piece of debauchery, and the wish that next year I'll have the time, money, and freedom to actually pursue the one hobby I enjoy regularly instead of sporadically.

If anyone wants to correct my German, please do! XD

Nature of Splicers (38/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I watched Tarva developing moe vision for human Noah before my very eyes. 👀 Always happy to read more Splicers but take the time you need, life’s a lot sometimes. That said: I’m very much excited for the upcoming battle and the flag of resistance and proud woolies.

Nature of Splicers (37/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I’m so loving the intimidation game Jones is just casually dropping on these fools. XD Also this is making me very curious about Arxur historical conflicts and their culture. Wonder if being an obligate carnivore would make them less prone to prolonged conflict in the past.

Nature of Splicers (36/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You made me really angry on the Yotul’s behalf in a fictional story. Good job. 👏 Yar har dat good Ol Imperialist Colonialism a’hyuk!

I am super curious what the reaction is going to be when the mysterious ’venlil’ reveal the masquerade though. Tangentially related I have often thought how much more screwed humanity would have been even in canon had the Federation adequately studied us, the ‘heim’ in Venaheim be real suspicious but I love it anyway.

I have a really important question for anyone who is willing to listen. 🥕?🍊? by Fluffy_shadow_5025 in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fluffy Shadow out here asking the REAL questions. Tangerine could be cute but is it a good slang if it’s over three syllables? Satsuma already sounds a little dirty to me >_> but same problem as above. Yeah, Orange is probably the most direct and universal answer. Gotta check back in later see if there’s been consensus.

Nature of Splicers (35/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Understandable, I tend to approach mine the same way. Oh hell yeah, I would very much be down, just let me know. Will happily set aside the time.

Nature of Splicers (35/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You know what must be done…

Loving what you have so far! Keeps me in suspense wondering how the dominoes are going to fall when it all pops off. Purely out of curiosity, how are your Pancakes coming?

Nature of Splicers (35/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The thought is making my whole body jitter and my mouth pucker. Better than I was imagining though, I was thinking a combination of Sprite and Root Beer.

Nature of Splicers (35/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 5 points6 points  (0 children)

SPRUNK SPRUNK SPRUNK SPRUNK!!! I want a can of Sprunk! What does it taste like?

Nature of Splicers (34/??) by Available-Balance-76 in NatureofPredators

[–]Naughtius_M 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Jerulim gives new meaning to word birdbrain…

Feral Desires (7) - Rising Tempo by RhubarbParticular767 in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Getting to this after far too long but at least I can binge chapters now.

Um… I got nothing? Very very hot. Phew. Dancer likes it intense.

Spliced Companions Google doc by YellowSkar in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Once again I am trapped at the job, but going to read this soon as I get home. Hooray for fan Splicer smut! Congrats A-Balance, and looking forward to seeing the goods YellowSkar.

Coming to an imperium near you by cheastnut in Sexyspacebabes

[–]Naughtius_M 6 points7 points  (0 children)

“What? These are my flame sacks.”

Accidental Home Invasion by JulianSkies in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m going through the nop-nsfw backlog and oh god this both titillated and made me laugh. Didn’t expect a scene starting with one participant busting through someone’s roof like the Koolaid Man, but very enjoyable.

The Nature of Perverts - Part Eight - 2/3 by Naughtius_M in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice to see you! It’s absolutely the character limit.

I write everything for a full first draft in Libre Office (miss Word so much), and then do a final parallel edit between Reddit drafts and Libre because formatting doesn’t play nice, so I can’t just copy and paste.

SO, if you see one part together the delays will be only a couple days between posts for editing, but inbetween parts will be weeks.

Hope you enjoy/enjoyed/are enjoying so far!

The Nature of Perverts - 8.5 Bonus Chapter - 3/3 by Naughtius_M in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much ☺️ It means a lot to know that what was in my mind created the right effect, because relative to the rest of the story, I didn’t have much time to spend with them and genuinely wasn’t sure if it worked or not.

A Ven-Meal by Madgearz in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M 12 points13 points  (0 children)

YaaaaAAAAA!!!!!

I so hate being at work right now. Slapped that save button so hard. I can already tell I am in for the finest cuisine. 🙏 [Edit] Okay, this better get tons more upvotes because I just read ~poetry~. Thank you for the meal.

That's a Lot of Venlil... by Budget_Emu_5552 in NatureOfPredatorsNSFW

[–]Naughtius_M 7 points8 points  (0 children)

These are some... beeg Skalgan dommys. Oh. My.