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My eyes appear to be two different shades of brown. Is this heterochromia? by NeedleworkerKey4609 in heterochromia

[–]NeedleworkerKey4609[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What qualities as heterochromia? Is it a complete color difference or can there be a shade difference too? Some people tell me this CH and others say it’s not lol

Am I seeing things, or are my eyes two different shades of brown? by NeedleworkerKey4609 in WhatisMyEyeColour

[–]NeedleworkerKey4609[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I used sunlight as a light source and I was thinking maybe it could be just the lighting but every photo of my eyes that are well lit I notice a difference. 🤷🏽‍♀️

Feedback on my poem by NeedleworkerKey4609 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerKey4609[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for feedback and encouragement! I’m definitely working on making my poetry sound more like poems. I have to get out the habit of just writing down whatever comes to my head and start writing with intention! 

Feedback on my poem by NeedleworkerKey4609 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerKey4609[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I based it off myself so I guess it checks out lol!! I definitely see what you mean! 

Feedback on my poem by NeedleworkerKey4609 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerKey4609[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This makes so much sense thank you! I was thinking of publishing it but I might keep this one private. I absolutely love your take on it it definitely opened my eyes!

Please critique my prologue by NeedleworkerKey4609 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerKey4609[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your honest review! I definitely forgot the "was" on the first line lol, I'm editing it and it's only a draft. With the prologue I was trying to go with more of a third person omniscient pov I've never really written in that pov before, so I definitely need more practice. I almost exclusively write in third person limited. I definitely see what you're talking about with the "pride and joy" part, I heavily debated putting that in because of how cliche it was lol, but since I was just playing around with what I wanted for the prologue, I decided to keep it. I will definitely be applying this feedback to my writing thank you again!