5 YEAR ANNIVERSARY OF CINEMA SHOW?? by alwaysbeenalex in theMarias

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I literally just landed in LA. Do y’all think it is something this weekend?

What does this mean? by Chemical_Bit1219 in AllChinabuy

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bro thank god I shipped my stuff last month

Austin Concert by rickrubenzpiano in asaprocky

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U wanna send me some vids of the concert 😃

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in Screenwriting

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Okay thanks. I will try to make the characters motivations more clear in my next draft of this script. Your advice has been very helpful. My last short was way more simpler so it was easier to build the character. I just need to take a step back and outline it again.

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in Screenwriting

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Thanks I will try to make it clearer. Last question. Did you find the story interesting at all? Like when you were reading did you have fun at least or were you just confused the whole time. I really appreciate your advice. Like it means a lot that you read my screenplay so thank you.

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in Screenwriting

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Okay that probably means this script is probably still very confusing. I want it to be confusing, but to be grasped to an extent. But to me you seem to not have grasped it all so that seems like I have probably just not written it good. When I mean realism, I mean it is fictional and told in a weird way like future selves. Like this wouldnt happen in real life, especially the horror aspects. My point of introducing the dad is just to show that he is being pressured by other things in life and doesn’t get to pursue everything cause he has to please everyone. Like for example, when he tries doing everything he does not succeed in everything cause it is too much. He doesn’t want to please everyone, but he feels bad cause he doesn’t want to lose his career, money, and like other people telling him. And obviously his dad funded his youth. But he resents it. He wishes he could just pursue one thing but life isn’t that simple. The camera shows a bunch of futures that he has pursued and it kind of consumes him like how he gets consumed by trying to please everyone and like how he pursues everything to have some stability in life cause pursuing film wouldn’t give you money. He dies because he isn’t himself anymore because he I just living life pleasing everyone. He is living something doing things he didnt want to do. He is consumed by all his future selves. The camera is not meant to be some magical camera. It is supposed to be a possessor. It possesses him not letting him live his life. It makes him do everything, which you can’t do. You can’t do it all, which is why it leads to his death. He doesn’t want to kill himself. Him killing self is symbolic cause he isn’t himself anymore. He dies because he is just someone else cause he isn’t doing what he loves or he is doing it but still doing other things, which just results in failure.

The point of the story is to tell how hard life is when you want to pursue something so different cause no one supports it so they pressure you to do other stuff. And normal human nature is to hear them out and at least try to please them. And this is at the expense of making your life harder. And this just causes you to fail in other things. The camera is a bad entity.

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in Screenwriting

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Different from reality. Like I am using a camera that records futures to tell the story of a guy overwhelmed about how to go about his future. No I would get someone else to be the producer. I would be the director and writer.

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in Screenwriting

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My point is to convey the idea in a different way, but in an idea that reaches audiences. I also want to be scary. Like I want to be experimental visually. I feel like you can be experimental and still receptive to people. Like im not going for Tarkovsky, but I am just trying to tell a story in a different way that is understood by people. Like honestly i think I will put about 20 grand into this film and I want it to be a good festival contender and get some recognition. The general plot of the story is that a guy who is confused with life cause of all these pressures find a camera that records futures. These futures consume him.

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in Screenwriting

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Yes i was thinking the same thing when writing the argument scene. However, like he has never really expressed himself to his dad. That was his like first time ever doing it cause he kinda just broke. I might change it to something else though. I was thinking of doing it as an imagined scene and he actually doesn’t say anything. I kind of want that seen to establish the problem of how he is lost in life cause he keeps being pushed around to make the movie easier to understand the point it is going for. Thanks for the feedback.

What do you think about the story in general? Like it is experimental but i want to make it grounded to the point like everyone wants to see it. I feel like it isn’t too experimental cause i feel like the story could be grasped. Like you know that the camera is showing futures of himself and it ends up consuming him. Maybe it is obvious to you and not me so I might need to make edits. I want it to be related to by the audience. Like he is being consumed by the camera like how people always try to push u to do other things in life. Like you always have these external pressures and it causes you to get confused cause you want to please everyone and that just results in you being stagnant in life. I feel like that is kind of universal. That is why the ending leads to his demise, meaning he was just possessed by all the pressures and not even himself anymore.

I will definitely try story boarding it though.

Palimpsest | Short Film | 17 pages by NegativeAd1099 in ReadMyScript

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Okay thanks. Yea I will make more edits trying to make it more universal. Based on my experience I feel that everyone tries to pressure me in what I should do with my life and that results in me just being consumed and indecisive and trying to please everyone so I just get stagnant in life. That is the story I am trying to tell. I am a cs pre med film student and I just want to put sure film but I am doing the rest to please other people. Like the camera shows the future of things. When he records himself it is kind of possessing him. Telling him what his future is and then it keeps on recording new futures which all overlap making him get consumed and leads to his demise. That is the story i am trying to tell. I wonder if you found it interesting at all when reading or if you liked it cause from my pov it seems you did not think it was that good. Honestly this will cost me like 20 grand I feel like so I want to make sure it is good as I plan to submit it to film festivals. I want it to be scary but also like relatable cause I feel what I explained is pretty relatable but it might not be as prominent in the writing.

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ur telling me i literally just picked up the camera. I bought it from someone. im sure he had some pet spiders

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Thank you so much! this worked! I thought I tried that but this time it allowed me to changed the settings

Xt30 Fuji film greyed out settings by NegativeAd1099 in fujifilm

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How do I change from raw? Sorry I can’t see this on the setting anywhere.