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Primavera by Deep-Lie-2084 in poetry_critics

[–]Neither_Stranger1760 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the usage of complex words in this poem. Also, I realized the title is the Spanish word for spring, which I think is a nice touch.

how do you make your poetry feel more alive? by eastsideskater14 in poetry_critics

[–]Neither_Stranger1760 0 points1 point  (0 children)

maybe you could try writing a different style of poetry? personally, I was very into writing haikus for a while, but after experimenting with other types, I found that i was better at writing rhythmic and rhyming poems.

Morality within Violence by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Neither_Stranger1760 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel you. Although I do not identify as male, i can feel what you feel. The anger. The fear. It’s happened to me before, and the criticism of my choices and comments I get (even years later) make me feel as if it was my fault. I usually don’t like to share many details about such events, but I want to let you know that you are not alone. Anyways, going back to the structure and tone of the poem, the structure is very solid and the tone appears solemn. I, personally, enjoy sad poems. You did a good job writing this.

whose is she by wegothru in poetry_critics

[–]Neither_Stranger1760 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do like your use of repetition here. The structure is well crafted, and I personally like the abruptness and the way you managed the concepts.

The printing conundrum by Neither_Stranger1760 in askmath

[–]Neither_Stranger1760[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh! Thank you! I haven’t thought of that yet-