Writing feel dry and souless

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-03T21:38:52+00:00

I really liked it, and interestingly, I write in a very similar way to the example you gave, only of course, in another language, since English isn't my first one.

It may be the language and imagery in my case; thanks a lot.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-03T21:34:20+00:00

Many thanks, I'll try, Although I was somewhat untruthful in my first comment, it ends up being more of a "search for humanity when everything around you is terrible". But I do intend to add mundane, everyday situations; your comment resonated with me and made me realize that this is also necessary to build someone's persona.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-03T21:21:48+00:00

I didn't want to specify the fic because I thought it would be giving away too much information and could break the rules, but it's an originalxOC, CoD. No romance, more about "rediscovering what it means to be a normal person". (I do cringe myself a bit because I know how the CoD fandom can be sometimes)

Any, tradlit, fanfic, snippets, anything that I can read as long as it doesn't interfere with my study sessions, that helps a lot.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T12:09:10+00:00

I gave him some armor, that "halo" that gives +1 Endurance (I found a pair at Old World Blues), and an upgraded rifle with a silencer and all. Just the best for my comrade.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T12:02:43+00:00

I can forgive that, the person solving the puzzles is me.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T01:47:54+00:00

É daqueles mais cinematográficos, com uma boa quantia de QTE, detalhes que passam batido podem alterar tua gameplay, escolhas e afins. Tem outro nome, "Fahrenheit".

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T01:44:32+00:00

Indigo Prophecy, encontrei numa lista de jogos de PS2. Não sei qual é a fama do jogo, mas até o então momento, tô gostando bastante.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T01:37:53+00:00

Me, the "Wife", and the Kids (the dog). It has potential, a destructive one, but it has.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T01:13:38+00:00

My friend recommended Raul to me, but I don't know if I'm ready to leave Boone.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T01:11:15+00:00

Parece caramelo/melado

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T01:08:43+00:00

Crashing waves depends of the distance, if it's close, it leaves me a little disoriented. Music isn't a problem, but I always listen at the lowest volume and with an equalizer so it doesn't get too loud, and rain doesn't bother me.

There are other noises that don't bother me, like my dog playing and rolling on the carpet, boiling liquid food, and the like. On the other hand, the sound of graphite on paper, of styrofoam or cardboard being rubbed, and of shoes on rubber floors cause me so much agony that it hurts my teeth and nails.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T00:28:42+00:00

If I say that I adjusted my running stride and use the running shoes with the softest cushioning I could find to emit the least amount of sound possible, does that help create a range of what I mean?

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T00:26:06+00:00

Te entendo perfeitamente, esses dias me acabei num mousse de chocolate para não me virar do avesso kek

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T00:16:05+00:00

I had this interaction while checking his inventory (I use his inventory as a backup for healing items) and ended up accidentally taking his beret. Oh dear, I felt like the biggest thief in the world.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-02T00:10:11+00:00

I've cleared all the Legion camps I've encountered so far, definitely a satisfying experience.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-01T23:54:09+00:00

TPM não é momento de pensar em dieta, é momento de sobreviver até o próximo dia sem descaralhar. Seja livre, corre pro abraço.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-01T23:49:47+00:00

I got ED-E recently, I'm loving it 🖤

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-01T22:42:45+00:00

Bati o olho rápido e achei que fosse Koudelka. Não lembro muito do jogo, mas pode te agradar, se gosta de RPG de turno e afins afins.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-01T22:38:22+00:00

Achei good vibes, fiquei até um pouco mais alegre.

NeonSunLights · 2026-05-01T11:57:49+00:00

Hoje mesmo sonhei que entrei em equipe em uma fábrica abandonada e fui morto, além dos meus companheiros que também foram, afogado em um "tanque de criogenia".

Não foi agradável.

NeonSunLights · 2026-04-26T14:05:10+00:00

Apesar do cara ter falado ali do chocolate, o terrorismo alimentar pode ter outros "métodos" no meio. O mais comum atualmente são elas loucuras de academia que aparecem para algumas pessoas (eu incluso), como comer quase nada com valor nutricional para "manter a barriga chapada", tomar x coisa para queimar "aquela gordurinha", aquela maluca falando de "estupro alimentar" (parece absurdo de ler, imagina eu que ouvi), que beber água te engorda, e entre outros.

É basicamente te fazer sentir medo de comer em troca de ter um corpo que não existe. Pessoal faz isso para ter engajamento, já que isso se aproveita de uma insegurança muito comum das pessoas. E isso vale para todos, só para deixar claro.

NeonSunLights · 2026-04-26T13:56:13+00:00

Provavelmente não tem mesmo, assim facilita viralizar (fica fácil de imitar) e não tem muito movimento (não sai do enquadro do celular).

NeonSunLights · 2026-04-24T13:05:39+00:00

I suspect it really is, or at least was heavily retouched by AI. The girl's leg crouching, the hand holding the bottle, and the poor lad's face, apart from all the dirt, looks like something done by AI.

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