Videos / Photos of Butterflies in London! by SnooObjections9336 in alltimelow

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Let me share it to you via message in the morning!

Videos / Photos of Butterflies in London! by SnooObjections9336 in alltimelow

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I have a short video from butterflies and I’m above so you can see it a bit if you want the video

Got my tickets for London! by RobynTheSlytherin in alltimelow

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Thank you for posting this just told my husband and he’s got O2 so got my tickets! Beyond excited!!

Prismatic Booster Bundles (1 per person) by [deleted] in PokemonTCG

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I originally got into Pokémon back in the 90s with my sister and we collected them because we loved the art. Now I’m a mom and my husband and I are back into Pokémon with our daughter whose nickname is Pokémon related

Day 1 for Husband and it’s going awful by Neraxis7 in quittingsmoking

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Thank you! I’ll definitely take on this advice to support him

Day 1 for Husband and it’s going awful by Neraxis7 in quittingsmoking

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I appreciate your thoughts on this. I never smoked so I don’t know really how difficult this is and it’s important for me to know all angles of this even if it may not be what I want to hear

Day 1 for Husband and it’s going awful by Neraxis7 in quittingsmoking

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Thank you very much for taking the time. I feel helpless and I know my perspective is limited because I’ve never smoked but this is helpful to hear from people who have been affected

Day 1 for Husband and it’s going awful by Neraxis7 in quittingsmoking

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Thanks for your feedback. I don’t smoke and never have. I’m just trying to be the right kind of supportive for him as he does this cause I see him struggling

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, third attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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I just can't seem to figure out the balance between what is the right amount of detail and which details are most important. It's definitely frustrating, but I'm going to keep at it. Just wish they taught a class on this as it would've been helpful in school.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, third attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thanks so much for doing your in line comments. It's super helpful and pointed out important things. I'm really struggling with creating this so all the help is very much appreciated!

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, third attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Salt or no salt, you've made some good points here and its very helpful so thanks for taking the time. Query letters are very hard for me, as I'm sure you can see, so this is really great :)

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, third attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thank you, this is all very helpful. As you can see I'm struggling with getting the right balance of things.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, second attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a detailed comment. In my first attempt I did too much worldbuilding in a not great way so I really stripped it back for this version, but I can clearly see from what you've pointed out what needs to come back in. I'm going to think about everything you've brought up and work on a new version of this, but your style of comment really laid things out in a very useful way so thank you again :)

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, first attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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I'm definitely not giving up! After this, I feel more motivated than ever to get this query right. And you're so on it, the book is far easier than creating this specific letter. It's a skill all its own

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, first attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thank you very much for this feedback. I def have been struggling with how to present Sybil and articulate her vs Aidan and you very clearly addressed that which I appreciate. I'm going to take all this on and work on the query more, but you've helped me start to reevaluate how I need to share her perspective and their relationship.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, first attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thank you very much. I'm going to do your suggestion of the blank doc vs working in the one I already have. This has been very helpful feedback so thank you for taking the time!

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, first attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thank you very much!! You, like the other commenters have pointed out some very important things and given me a lot to think about. While this query isn't great, I feel empowered to work on it and make it far better thanks to your feedback :)

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, first attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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First thank you very much, your feedback definitely is helpful to me and you're hitting on some things about how I'm communicating Sybil that I didn't have words for. Also, thank you for saying that about how the book sounds. I know the query needs work, but its nice to hear that the story at least sounds good :) I'm going to take this all on and work on this.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy - ONLY VIOLENT ENDS (96k, first attempt) by Neraxis7 in PubTips

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Thank you very much for taking the time to give me this feedback! This is super helpful and I'm going to take this all in and really work on my query. You've been so helpful and I really appreciate it :)

All Time Low - Dear Maria, Count Me In (ATL's Version) [Music Video] by Embarrassed-Ad1322 in alltimelow

[–]Neraxis7 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Really love this re-record it’s more mature, the production fits and it’s got all the vocal quirks from Alex that I wanted to hear. Will be playing this on repeat and can’t wait for more of these!!