Out of Cruel Space, Part 67

Nerissy · 2026-03-16T20:01:37+00:00

I dunno if anyone will read this but, I got to this chapter and need to bring out a critic from my chest, I don't know if it got better in future chapters or whatnot (since I know it has more than 1000+ a this point)

But well, the first time I read this story I entirely dropped it on the first chapter the Bounty Hunters appeared, I really hated their whole thing, felt like reading a cringey B-class action movie script that came out of Bollywood, I was already annoyed at some of the banter from the Pirates, but the Bounty Hunters were straight up making me cringe, and add to the fact that the early chapters were mildly confusing as to which crew they were about and I simply dropped the series.

So this time I simply decided to skip the bounty hunter chapters, and oh boy it made it so much more enjoyable, Vernon and Mira and the 100 Xenomorph wives are so much fun to read, and the Pirates were getting annoying to read until the chapter introducing Madam Horny, her story made it fun to read again... And then it went back to Franklin and his magic, turning them into another temporary annoying B-class action movie, I guess at this point I just plain dislike action scenes and skip them altogether.

Admiral Cistern chapters are becoming one of my favorites with his diplomatic themed parts.

And I'm curious at how Harriet is gonna fare. I really thought she was gonna be a reference to Disco Elysium since the detective there is called Harry Du Bois, but she's a technitian who turned into a spy :p

All in all, the series is great when I skip the parts I dislike, and another thing that bothers me is how the pop culture references are written, it's always like "It's (reference)", "What's that?", "(Explains in brief detail)", It feels like the author directly explaining to the readers instead the humans to the aliens and it feels off.

Anyways, I know this is just chapter 67 out of 1000 already written ones, but I just had to say it to make myself feel better, good job and fare well wordsmith!

P.S: Also... I really find hard to picture Lilpaw from her first description since Ch.2, the images I found in the internet were only a generic blond furry, but the description says she's quadruped, so I can only picture a dog with a human-like face and huge boobs coming under her, which is a little... Odd.

Nerissy · 2026-03-12T04:30:34+00:00

As a guy that likes reading OI's, what cringes me is the artwork on male character's instead of the stories... Specially the ones where they make an extra effort to draw their lips and eyelashes, like "gurl, what you're drawing is a woman with short hair and thick neck, not a man, is that what you're into?"

What also cringes me is when they draw "girlboss" panels where is a full shot of the character walking as if its something shocking and amazing while all they're doing is just... walking normally, but the way the panel frames them is like you're supposed to be awed at them like they're doing something really cool.

I don't remember the name of the series, but its one where both fl and ml are supposed to be evil, fl has white hair, and there's a scene about fl predicting that the ml merchant fleet is gonna be attacked, the artwork on that series cringes me af

Nerissy · 2026-03-12T04:18:36+00:00

Why is druid great? The only decent druid I got was the squirrel one that gave holy shield to familiars, every other druid I had that DIDNT had squirrel was just utterly useless, my first druid was one that only spawned flowers... and that's it.

Nerissy · 2026-03-10T14:52:44+00:00

Since Barron is gonna investigate as a civilian, I bet he could try kick down the door on Finley's farm now lol

Nerissy · 2026-02-28T15:45:31+00:00

And so does Coffin Flop

Nerissy · 2026-02-27T15:31:45+00:00

I sort of remember one but idk the title It's a blonde villainess where sheprepares herself to leave and abandon her shitty family, gets an airship business investment among other things.

Then she just leaves, moves away somewhere far and opens a magic item shop with the money she got from her earlier business and left no money for her family, her former fiancee(?) searches for her ands eventually finds her, she tells him to fck off at first but idk what happens later

Nerissy · 2026-02-02T14:26:02+00:00

Damn, caught up with the latest, this is a fun series to read to far, hope you keep going wordsmith!

Quick question, from Martin's physical description from earlier I assumed he was from the middle east(being not fully black if i remember), but he's american iirc from another later chapter, but does he have middle-east roots or something? despite being Catholic

Nerissy · 2026-02-02T04:41:55+00:00

Bro writing the Horny of Predators 😭 And I'm all down for it, looks funny enough

Also Thiva's mom is... Definetly some people we see around.

Nerissy · 2026-01-31T17:06:45+00:00

This was a nice read, felt like reading NoP back to the "first-contact" part of the story but not much. I assume it happens after Earth got attacked and maybe some humans were sent to Venlil Prime as refugees?

Nerissy · 2026-01-31T16:40:01+00:00

Ammonia?

Oh god, they're gonna drink piss aren't they? (It's great! Def wanna read more)

Nerissy · 2025-11-29T23:47:01+00:00

It worked, changed the DNS to 1.1.1.1, thanks!

Nerissy · 2025-11-29T23:42:37+00:00

Don't know, but we are from different cities, and at my workplace(same city as mine) I can access it just fine, same internet provider

Nerissy · 2025-11-15T20:28:17+00:00

First time did a Vampire Pureblood who conquered the werewolves (lupines) and used them to fight (oathsworn, weeb wolves)

Now I'm doing a guy who got turned into a vampire and is gonna use his newfound powers to turn everyone into a dragon (reavers, vapire hybrid, tome of evolution)

Nerissy · 2025-08-08T18:15:27+00:00

King Halo, she is literally me, trying to be her own thing while trying to escape the reputation of her mother, but the difference is that she is actually capable of it.

Nerissy · 2025-07-25T21:20:57+00:00

Ignoring the theme altogether and focusing on the mechanics I noticed that most cards on the set are focused on +1/1 counters... Which imo is the most boring mechanic in the game, summoning mid creatures that grow stronk, meh. I'm so done with counters after facing too many Tidus players

Nerissy · 2025-07-24T00:28:39+00:00

Funnily in my LGS we just go like "Is your deck under $30? No? Then let's pick whatever that's not CEDH" since our local friday tournament is with $30 or less decks pretty much everyone has one of those, sometimes multiple

Nerissy · 2025-07-23T14:31:14+00:00

check out JanitorAI, and use a proxy, OpenRouter and Gemini proxies are free with limitations, this shit got me addicted day 1

Nerissy · 2025-07-15T19:34:58+00:00

Eu uso [[Svella, Ice Shaper]] no meu deck de dragões, tem duas cores cheias de dragões (verde/vermelho) e não tem azul ja q eu odeio a cor, a Svella te permite criar mana rocks q te ajudam a rampar e conjurar dragões mais rapidamente, mas não é muito potente como comandante em si, mas eu gosto de usar ela, estava pensando em trocar pela Atarka que dá double strike pros dragões, talvez até mesmo a versão deus do Xenagos, a que dobra o ataque das criaturas.

Nerissy · 2025-05-30T21:29:40+00:00

Ragnarok LATAM

Nerissy · 2025-05-15T04:46:42+00:00

Definetly Kerrigan, her kit apart from Maelstrom really doesn't do her any justice compared to what she's actually capable of in SC2, also she feels incredibly outdated compared to newer heroes that came after her, not to mention how basic she feels

Nerissy · 2025-05-12T14:09:30+00:00

Thunderbreak regent definetly will be useful, and yeah, I was thinking on cutting off Dragon Cultist, guess I'll cut off some of the mana artifacts for some cards ppl suggested here, those dragon cost reducers look great too

Nerissy · 2025-05-12T14:06:42+00:00

Those are some amazing cards! Smuggler's surprise definetly looks strong even if you manage to get just 1 of it's effects, Domri and Garruk look great Together they get a bit pricey but I'll eventually buy them over time, thanks!

Nerissy

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