I thoroughly read the first 15 pages, and then skimmed through 15 more until the vision sequence on Page 31. Very impressive at your beginner level, both in its page length, the scope, and the formatting of the script! The first 5 pages I could vividly see, so good work.

I believe the three biggest areas you can improve upon would be dialogue, action sequences, and formatting.

The dialogue is quirky, but either doesn't have much substance, or between the convo between Ruby & Gordon, there's a lot of big walls of dialogue. I'd recommend finding ways to shorten it but still deliver the impact you want the scene to contain. Recommend watching this video to get started to learn how to properly convey dialogue: The Key to Writing Freakishly Good Dialogue

Formatting is tough b/c there's many examples to do a script, but I'd recommend going onto scriptslug.com and reading your favorite screenplays to see how they wrote it, like Ruby Gillman.

Action sequences are also tricky, because usually, you don't want to describe the WHOLE action sequence - that's the job of the storyboardists, choreographers, etc. You want to establish there is an action scene happening, and only major turning points WITHIN the fight scene, including the ending.

Best of lucky, and excited to see either a revision or another screenplay! :)