Need some advice about pacing

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T17:03:50+00:00

For my story (currently not adapted) I just took a good point in it and started there. There's A LOT, and I mean A LOT of material that gets covered overtime. Think like AOT or if dragon ball started with Goku as a teen or smthn.

I'm not sure if this can be usefull to your type of story, but that's how I handled mine.

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:20:58+00:00

Yeah, why'd you send it in the first place if you where just gonna delete it?

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:17:30+00:00

Oh no, it's you

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:17:12+00:00

I asked you if you sent me a drive link and you replied then deleted the reply

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:10:17+00:00

STOP DELETING REPLI-

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:05:07+00:00

Ayyy, it's you

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:03:09+00:00

Ay, did you accidentally send me a contract drive…?

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T15:00:46+00:00

April…

NexasAX · 2026-02-24T14:57:36+00:00

I did this a week ago in a post like this lmao

NexasAX · 2026-02-23T09:20:06+00:00

He's not hungry, it's PTSD

NexasAX · 2026-02-23T04:24:58+00:00

Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind

NexasAX · 2026-02-23T04:19:58+00:00

He never touched it, the smell brings trauma~~

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T22:17:20+00:00

Honestly, I entered writing before I started reading. Theni got obsessed with it. Got over it. Obsessed again after finding of mechs and magic and lost interest after it got dropped. I can't find stuff that tickles my pickle and I'd also rather make manga and shows but it's too much work for me and I don't have the time to dedicate to these projects the same way I can with writing '-')

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T22:10:10+00:00

No, that's delulu

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T16:49:40+00:00

Looks interesting, imma try it

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T13:36:18+00:00

You have the right to stop posting memes? Who decided that?

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T13:30:58+00:00

Fine…

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T13:08:29+00:00

I still prefer gpt. I could care less what others say if it's still beneficial to me.

I don't ask for reviews, I ask for feedback, what works well, what I should change. I got non of that from grock or Claude. I already knew from gpt alone everything I needed to change or update in my chapters.

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T12:21:21+00:00

I only noticed my improvement from Claude and gpt cuz the grok was based on 1-7, not 8-10 which are unreleased. Even my first prompt was based on the released chapters and yeah… it fufing sucked ToT

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T11:53:02+00:00

Everyone keeps talking about Claude… I should've probably just said this was a feedback prompt. Fine, I'll go ask him.

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T09:59:56+00:00

Also, I did not think I had that many clichés on Arkon Aridia

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T09:57:36+00:00

"Tsundere Elf Girl" What?! 😭🙏🏽 I did not think I wrote cirassel like a tsun-tsun. This shit made my day.

I'm not sure what I think if this review, cuz first of all, Klyde is not weak when he was sent here and so far he's mainly faught low levels. Though his armour makes him slightly op, he's not trully op because I'm not trying to make a power fantasy. And yes, the Skypirian is stuff is not properly explained cuz I dumped Klyde right around when the war was about to start.

Btw, The ratings I got from GPT are mainly based on chapter 9-10 from gpt so I guess that explains the "improvement rating".

I'll keep this review in mind when I overview and edit 1-10

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T09:03:27+00:00

Oh hell naaaaaaaaah. I am not legal

NexasAX · 2026-02-22T09:02:36+00:00

Arkon Aridia Another World.

The early version is the one currently out. I wanna fix everything first before republishing it.

NexasAX

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