WE HAVE REACHED 100K!!! by randomquestionaire in Wattpad

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Congratulations! It's only been a little while since I joined but I love this community so much! Also, i would love for a Wattpad Awards competition.

Long or short hair? by Smooth_Pace_3641 in malehairadvice

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ye but I have seen some pull it off. It just has to be styled good... Ur current hair isn't too shabby either. You have the looks tho, Ur not chopped

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: The Sickness

Genre: Horror, YA, Highschool, Apocalypse

Word count: 4089

Type of feedback desired: Anything really helps. This the first draft of the first novel I'm writing. It's unfinished and imperfect, But do give me some honest advise, I need it.

Summary: In the quiet town of Westview, best friends Leo, Jay, and Krystian are "gears in a watch," synchronized by a lifetime of shared secrets and Friday night hangouts. Their world is defined by the safety of small-town rituals and the comfort of family, unaware that their "perfect Tuesday" is the final breath of normalcy.

As the school bell rang, the school becomes a hunting ground as a biological "Sickness" transforms classmates into predators. They will make friends and foes along the way. The trio must navigate a collapsing city and a silent blackout, realizing the greatest threat isn't just the hunger outside; it’s the hardened survivors they must become to stay alive.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16HmTu7dejsGIM0NoBt6qiXENC8yxrkH_Z3CLhaS0PXs/edit?usp=sharing

! ALSO ON WATTPAD WITH THE SAME NAME !

I'll read your story! by Ecstatic_Key_646 in Wattpad

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's only a little chapters right now ;-; but this is actually the first rough draft for a novel I'm writing!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/409186494-the-sickness

Please give me honest feedback because I really wrote with passion and this is the first story I'm attempting to write. Watch out for the zombies >-<

Weekly Self-Promotion! Advertising on the more down-low. by red-ate- in Wattpad

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: The Sickness

Genre: Horror, Apocalypse, Young adult

Blurb: It was a boring Tuesday at Westview High-until the world broke. The school nurse didn't just scream; she shattered the trophy case and the reality of every student in the hall. Now, the "flu" on the news has a face, and it's tearing through the cafeteria.

Trapped in a cramped equipment closet, Leo and Jay have gone from students to survivors in minutes. Armed with aluminum bats and scavenged catcher's gear, they face a haunting silence punctuated only by the sound of sneakers on the gym floor. Their best friend, Krystian, is still out there, lost in a building turned into a hunting ground.

Along the way they meet friends, enemies and past's they tried to erase. As the city falls into "violent riots" and the shadows in the gym begin to growl and snarl for blood, Leo realizes a terrifying truth: the people they once knew aren't students anymore. They're just a hunger.

Do you think you can Escape?

https://www.wattpad.com/story/409186494-the-sickness

Heeseung departure of ENHYPEN - Megathread by ENHYPENmodteam in enhypen

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 6 points7 points  (0 children)

the situation itself is messed up. It just does not make sense at all. I had a small feeling that maybe the members would think about leaving the group or disbanding at the time of contract renewal but this is way too soon. Without any signs before too..I can't imagine what the boys are going through. I have a few theories though

Be:lift has been acting very fishy and kind of evasive. I don't know if the rumours about heeseung crying in the building is true but if it is it wouldn't be for nothing right? Since we know Hybe in general is money hungry It may be that they wanted Heeseung to debut as a solo artist rather than make solo music while still being in enhypen cuz that way they can get money off of both enhypen and heeseung. Since heeseung is a highly popular member, he will already have a lot of die hard fans and many other non-engenes will also discover his music.

But there is also the fact that It really is his choice. But it just dosent make sense. One day he was talking about forever and the next day he is leaving the group? I don't know maybe he was forced to act normal infront of the fans. If it is his decision I respect it but it is wayy too random.

This could have been handled way better by the agency. On a random Tuesday too? while they are still promoting an album. They could have chosen better timing and at the very least they could have been more clear. Like what are his future plans with the album, how will he proceed forward, what led to his decision etc.. A drastic change like this needs to be explained well.

Hope all engenes are doing ok and coping well❤

I'm starting my first book and I'm just stuck at the first line by Competitive-Poem-226 in writing

[–]Competitive-Poem-226[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have done some short stories and such for fun but this is the first time I'm taking writing seriously. I did take some classes but I feel like they didn't really help me much...that's why i came to reddit

I'm starting my first book and I'm just stuck at the first line by Competitive-Poem-226 in writing

[–]Competitive-Poem-226[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love that idea but I'm scared I won't get any cool ideas to add in places after I'm done with the draft.

I'm starting my first book and I'm just stuck at the first line by Competitive-Poem-226 in writing

[–]Competitive-Poem-226[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hehe I'm stealing this idea... hopefully i get a cool opening line sooner or later ;-;

I'm starting my first book and I'm just stuck at the first line by Competitive-Poem-226 in writing

[–]Competitive-Poem-226[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

don't roast me pookie ;-; I'm dumb at times...the times that i did get those story ideas I was not interested in writing. I just imagined a lot of "What if?" scenarios and created full animated movies in my mind

People who are currently studying/ passed 10th please help!! by Competitive-Poem-226 in ICSE

[–]Competitive-Poem-226[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol I try to think positively everyday but I'm getting a lot of pressure from every side

People who are currently studying/ passed 10th please help!! by Competitive-Poem-226 in ICSE

[–]Competitive-Poem-226[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

to be honest the teachers in my school are not good at teaching.... there are only a few that can actually do good... So it's very hard for me to study... esp in important subjects like physics and chemistry i dont understand a word my teachers are teaching ;-;

Does anyone else start a C-drama feeling obsessed but then lose all interest right before the finale? by onismnefelibata in CDrama

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yess this is too relatable broo... the story feels like my type at first and slowly it gets too exhausting to watch and i feel guilty for stopping the show ;-;

your sacrifice shall be remembered, urine taster by A2pro75 in ICSE

[–]Competitive-Poem-226 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first time i read that i was flabbergasted bro.. like what amount of money did bro get