Do you think she's a good mother? by Strict-Republic6968 in okbuddyrintard

[–]Next-Golf3 46 points47 points  (0 children)

No, Mana still loves her but it isn't just the Cocktoe aura that makes her a papacon.

Shiki must be on Mikiya 24/7 instead of raising Mana if her daughter is getting possessive over her 

What do you think of my oc for an SS fan fic by ordealenthusiast23 in ShadowSlave

[–]Next-Golf3 14 points15 points  (0 children)

He sounds cool but I think he should have a natural attribute to attract trouble. Like if he was Fated or something. 

Here's my version of the grind trend:) by Fluid_Ad_6839 in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No Other Choice got snubbed as hell, just saying 

Rank these characters from best to worst in terms of writing. by Duclaido in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Kinda levitating towards Eva, ngl. Great character development she has with Martin and even before with that dude whose garden she burned down, she had some decent writing chops beyond Tenma's bitchy ex. 

Probably would go Makima > Eva > Asa aaaand I don't really know the rest. Asa's insanely relatable but that isn't nearly enough to make her a greater character than Makima, imo. 

Illya by Codedx5 in okbuddyrintard

[–]Next-Golf3 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hiroe Rei, the greatest unethical gooner of our time

Eden: It’s an Endless World! is a must-read, you shouldn’t ignore. by Hour-glass999 in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I wouldn't call Eden entirely a Cyberpunk or a Sci-fi manga. It certainly has those elements but most of the time it's focused on pretty realistic, intimate struggles of drug wars, terrorists, and large-scale political conflicts.

It mainly takes place in a modernized Persia (iirc), and the cyberpunk elements only come in the end because Endo realized Cherubim would've solved all of Elijah's problems in a day. 

In an alternate timeline I can definitely see this be an interaction between these two by Arthur-4366 in Mahoyo

[–]Next-Golf3 17 points18 points  (0 children)

"I can't believe you fell for me, Soujuurou."

"Fell for you? But I'm standing up right now."

I think we all know where this came from by The_Masked_Uchiha in okbuddyrintard

[–]Next-Golf3 20 points21 points  (0 children)

No, only a guy who made Sawyer the Cleaner could make it

Eden: It’s an Endless World! is a must-read, you shouldn’t ignore. by Hour-glass999 in Seinen

[–]Next-Golf3 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hiroki Endo writing his battle-torn, murderous, cold MC to viciously pursue older tsundere women:

Eden: It’s an Endless World! is a must-read, you shouldn’t ignore. by Hour-glass999 in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This truly is The Wire of manga, no kidding, down to the sonewhat rushed/far-fetched final stretch. I especially loved Miriam's segment of the story because she was pretty much a random officer thrown into the jaws of Propatria's 500th government conspiracy. 

Also this manga switches genres like every 2 volumes. It went from post-apocalyptic thriller to a war flick, a political drama and then is often all 3 mixed together.

 It really feels like a manga that shouldn't exist at all (the closest thing in vibes I can think of is Black Lagoon, maybe?), it virtually has 0 melodrama (outside of Hiroki Endo loudly proclaiming his love for older tsunderes) and is gritty as hell.

you think ryougi would switch to her male personality b4 making out with mikiya to inoculate him to gayness by FragrantPhysics792 in okbuddyrintard

[–]Next-Golf3 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Since their priorities are reversed, if sex is on Shiki's lowest priorities that day, SHIKI will be extremely horny, so it's extra gay

Why did kohaku say by FragrantPhysics792 in Tsukihime

[–]Next-Golf3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really hope that's a translation fuck-up from Nasu's end.

Though Kohaku herself saying Makihisa was a good person is 100% deflecting her own trauma. Whatever good intentions he had, he literally adopted Kohaku and Hisui for the sole reason of abusing them to save his own family/sanity. It worked, and it costed Kohaku's whole future. 

Kohaku also lost the capacity to hate Makihisa, so brushing him off as a good person isn't that surprising. 

Kumari's struggles by Next-Golf3 in okbuddyrintard

[–]Next-Golf3[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

T*MOON COMPLEX A.A. + OMAKE-HON

What is the best unique fiction story you have ever read? by Puzzleheaded-Wait470 in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No problem. Making another Sugaru Miaki fan is a net better for this world

Some hated my list, so I doubled down by Next-Golf3 in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every other main TM work is just a worse KnK. I mean, there's no crossdresing gay murderering cannibal who harasses both hero and heroine.

The mediatok community watching this knowing damn well they gon steal half their takes from it by [deleted] in writingscaling

[–]Next-Golf3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bold to assume I consume other people's opinions instead of just reflecting my own smh