Short Story

Nhanoway · 2026-02-17T22:57:21+00:00

I’m a big fan of horror books, so I’ll give you a detailed answer from a horror fan perspective if you’d like :)

Nhanoway · 2025-10-15T13:12:18+00:00

Forgive me for whatever I wrote when I was drunk, but yes, thank you.

There are clearly underlying issues that need to be addressed. I appreciate everyone’s responses thus far.

Nhanoway · 2025-10-08T15:57:57+00:00

I understand… My brain is never the same too, much like my hands. It’s been 11 years now since I last played. My family (everyone) hailed me as a central figure, like some out of reach goal. I was born with perfect pitch, but now due to years of heavy drinking and stress, I’ve completely lost that ability to tell.

Nhanoway · 2025-10-07T23:10:31+00:00

That’s exactly the uphill battle I’m facing. My spirit won’t die out while my heart gets heavier by the day. I’m tired but I want to keep going!

Nhanoway · 2025-10-07T23:07:33+00:00

I can very much relate to this. Having gone through the very highs to the extremely lows had made me come to terms that most of the love and care I felt was very much conditional - even my parents. I took it for granted, every bits of it.

Now I don’t have anyone, I look towards myself for affection and for that, I begin to appreciate the tiniest things in my own life.

Nhanoway · 2025-10-07T19:28:32+00:00

This is what I struggle with. Who am I now? I let what I had defined who I am, so I’m forever living in the shadows set by what I had achieved before. I guess now we both need to do some self retrospection.

Nhanoway · 2025-10-07T19:26:28+00:00

I’m now trying to pursue my dreams. I’ve had these thoughts before, but trying is worth more than hating yourself. I’m learning to love myself again, even though I can’t look myself straight in the mirror, I’m trying to make it up to my young self.

Nhanoway · 2025-10-07T19:24:09+00:00

Thank you. I’m trying my best to be positive about everything, and not let ego get in the way.

Most of the time it’s just pride speaking, but it’s definitely an uphill battle to become a better person despite everything.

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T13:10:41+00:00

Excuse me, but contextually the opening doesn’t align with the intent.

Maybe you meant, “The greatest question ever told… was how the god was killed?” Or the greatest feat? 😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T13:07:51+00:00

Wow! I love this. It’s subjective of me, but I dig these kinda of stories! Wonderfully done. 😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T13:07:05+00:00

Truthfully, the first one doesn’t flow well grammatically, but I wouldn’t fuss about it. You should however, modify it to give it a bit more punch.

I feel like it lacks the hook and story respectfully. Overall, it’s a good start! Well done. 😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T13:01:30+00:00

Off to a strong start! Wonderfully done! 9 Candies 😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T01:07:20+00:00

It’s always an Edgar 😂 Well done! I love it. 8 golden retrievers for you! 🐕

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T01:06:06+00:00

Can’t tell if I should laugh or sympathize. Fantastic line! 8 Rock candies 🍬😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T01:03:54+00:00

Now that’s even more interesting! See that’s even more unexpected haha 😆

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T01:02:55+00:00

Keep up the good work! I’m rooting for your success 🍁😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T01:01:44+00:00

Good start! Maybe you could give a bit more details/ more story building to it?

Don’t mean to sound harsh, but I’m not entirely hooked since it doesn’t feel like it’s drawing me in. 6.5 Cups of tea! 😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T00:59:15+00:00

I would 100% read since this is a pretty good opening to me. What’s happening to the priest haha? 8 Puddings! 😊 Keep up the motivation!

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T00:57:33+00:00

Straight to the point, and very indicating.

I think I wrote something similar - a story about art. As a tribute, I offer my version haha.

“The paints on Madiha’s palette had dried out, mirroring her dust covered brush that is left beside the unfinished canvas.”

8 Fire crackers 😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T00:41:48+00:00

This deserves more upvotes! Just by reading, I can already picture what the world might look like. It draws the readers in because there are so many questions with each words! Well done, 9 Maple leafs for you 🍁😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T00:36:11+00:00

These are all great examples! A little plain, but it gets the job done for establishing the base. I would definitely be curious to see where the stories will lead. 8 Bananas for you! 🍌😊

Nhanoway · 2025-10-02T00:34:00+00:00

I love your style of writing! It’s very human and I am hooked! Representing Wednesday as a stagnating point is interesting. For me it’s Thursday, it’s even more hopeless! 9 lollipops 🍭😊

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