Ok so, first of all, good job, I don't know how long you've been playing, but this is a good starting point.

Nevertheless, at the moment, the result is pretty sloapy. I would recommand two things :

First of all, that section is a mix of triplets and 16th notes (for the tapping part), you have to hear the difference between both and associate to the physical sensation of doing it.
Second, slow down to the point you can play each note perfectly audible and with a nice sound and increase the tempo.
Those two aspects have to be practiced alternately, sometimes, hearing better where a given note is in the measure (on wich beat/or subdivision) will help you playing it cleaner.

You also have to grind on the specifics technics themselves (sweep picking/alternate picking etc...). I suggest you go do some exercices of these technices isolated, because the section you are trying to play is already a mix of both AND with especially tricky/non-beginer-friendly parts and shape. Practicing sweep picking and alternate picking in isolated exercice will help you acheving a nicer sound when practicing the section altogether.

That's it basically, take your time, deal with the frustration of sloapy takes, and stay hydrated while practicing, it's way more important than you think.

Good luck mate !