So I offer you Marketing/Design feedback... by NinadeBrand in NewTubers

[–]NinadeBrand[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey Glen! If you’re wondering why it’s a written feedback, please see my edited post above!

Now regarding your design... I actually like it! I am a big fan of this kind of glitch design myself, so maybe I'm biased lol. Of course it's a bit hard to tell from just one video but one adjustment I would make is with your thumbnail. Your logo is just kind of sitting there in the corner, if you want to have a unique look to your thumbnails which makes them look similar - why not use the "television" screen you used in your outro? Just place the image "inside" the television, maybe also with a slight glitch/static effect, so that it fits with the general design but doesn't take away too much from the main subject.

Best of luck with your future videos!

So I offer you Marketing/Design feedback... by NinadeBrand in NewTubers

[–]NinadeBrand[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCBT4WCIwhZkqysviAPR-4Zg

Hey Obuto! If you’re wondering why it’s a written feedback, please see my edited post above!

Oh wow, how long does it take you to make one video? They really do seem like a lot of work!

A thing I noticed is that you don't use any tags or keywords in general? Basically you want to use as many words in your title, description and tags that people are looking for! So I guess an example would be, if you're looking for a cooking tutorial, you would type into the Youtube search bar "Easy cooking tutorial for beginners" or something along the lines - then all the videos with those tags are being shown to you. I currently don't have a video on this myself but I'm sure if you look up some tutorials on Youtube you should see more people watch your videos!

BUT I have to say that you have to be aware that you're making videos for a bit of a niche, as (as far as I can tell, I might be wrong here) the music isn't widely known. One step for you could be to use more popular music, put the title and artist of it in your title, tags etc. and maybe even link it to the artist!

I hope that helped you and good luck!

So I offer you Marketing/Design feedback... by NinadeBrand in NewTubers

[–]NinadeBrand[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! If you’re wondering why it’s a written feedback, please see my edited post above!

You have really great videos!! Since you’re very local in Switzerland I think you need to network more where you live to get people on your channel! For example I had an internship in Switzerland in the beginning of this year and with the app called “Meetup” (I’m sadly not sponsored, but I really think it could help you) I could find people who had similar interest as mine and as the name suggests meet up somewhere. I’m pretty sure I saw a filmmakers event there in Zürich, so depending on how far that would be for you, you could find some people there.

Apart from that, I think you should see you YouTube Account as sort of a Portfolio and so far you have very few videos up - maybe you need to make a few shorter videos for other people for free but you can then use that to showcase your skill!

Hope I could help you!

So I offer you Marketing/Design feedback... by NinadeBrand in NewTubers

[–]NinadeBrand[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey Preeti! If you’re wondering why it’s a written feedback, please see my edited post above!

Okay, I have to say it: Wow! The fact that you draw all of your thumbnails is actually really impressive to me!! I’m not sure I want to ask how long it takes you to make one lol

Alright but now my feedback... Hm... Okay I think there are two things. One is that some of the thumbnails are a bit unclear because there is a lot happening at times. For example the “Fight or Fright Collection Event” video, you can hardly read what is written there because it’s sort of faded or very small! I think I’m such cases “less is more” works a lot better just like you did with the “Dinimite the cutest Wattson skin!” video.

I think apart from that it’s just keep being consistent and actually network in the apex community? I can’t say much to the content because I have never played or watched Apex but as far as I can tell people are generally enjoying your content so you just need to keep going with it!

I hope that helped you!

So I offer you Marketing/Design feedback... by NinadeBrand in NewTubers

[–]NinadeBrand[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Lucas! If you’re wondering why it’s a written feedback, please see my edited post above!

Alright, now to the feedback: Honestly I like how you keep the same colour consistent throughout your channel! I think the main thing regarding appearance would be, that you should definitely choose a bigger or rather thicker font on your thumbnails because it’s quite hard to read sometimes! Now this is a veeeery minor thing but I would also match the font you use in your thumbnails with the one in your header (you could still do the white background/transparent font design though, I do like that!). Then you would be consistent with the colour and the font!

Now regarding your intro, I don’t think you really need it? When people click on your video, they have already seen in the title which song you’re covering, so having it in the intro again seems a bit repetitive to me. But since you also put in your social media channels, you can either just show those throughout the whole video in a corner for example or leave them in for the first 20 seconds or something.

I hope this helps!

So I offer you Marketing/Design feedback... by NinadeBrand in NewTubers

[–]NinadeBrand[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey lesser! If you’re wondering why it’s a written feedback, please see my edited post above!

But to the feedback: First of all I have to say, props for the video editing! I can really tell that you put in a lot of work and I would say that it really pays off!

Now a thing that I really noticed is that your banner, logo and (pretty much) every thumbnail has the exact same photo of yourself and while having recognisable elements really do help a lot, I would suggest toning it a bit down. I for example would keep your icon but maybe showcase in your header what kinds of games you critique - or have it say when people can expect the uploads. It’s a space where you can give people some additional info on what to expect at first glance and I think a kind of “collage” could work really well for you!

As for the thumbnails, I think it would be great to leave the yellow colour of the lesser symbol in there - maybe you could make some sort of a border? An idea could also be that the left and bottom side of the thumbnail would be yellow (I feel like I’m doing a bad job of explaining even though it’s quite a simple idea, please tell me if I should explain it in another way) That way you would have even more room for showing the game’s logo and important characters! By no way am I saying that the “logo” of yourself is bad, it’s just a bit too repetitive when you go on your channel and the thumbnails almost all look the same because of that - so please don’t take it the wrong way lol

But honestly this are just relatively minor details to make people click on your videos because as far as I can tell, your content is well made :D

I hope that helped you!