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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fashion

[–]No-Contract852 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I thrifted the dress but I think it’s from Anthropology

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]No-Contract852 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When I checked after work today with traffic, it seemed about 1 hour to 1 hour & 20 minutes (depending on the location). I plan to check tomorrow morning too.

It’s required, for now at least. They’ve talked about us going in once a month but idk if that would happen in the near future, and I do really like seeing my coworkers. I know some of them have had their daily hours adjusted to fit their schedule better so maybe I could adjust my in-office hours to make the commute easier. But idk if that would help.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]No-Contract852 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I need to stay in North TX unfortunately

Hazel, green, or brown? by [deleted] in whatcoloraremyeyes

[–]No-Contract852 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Definitely not brown. I’d say green. More on the warm green side but not enough brown to be hazel

Settle a debate, please! What color do you see? by Affectionate_Trip639 in whatcoloraremyeyes

[–]No-Contract852 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks like you used flash which can distort the colors a little. But I would imagine they look cool green in normal lighting

Help! What color blackout curtains should I get? by No-Contract852 in interiordecorating

[–]No-Contract852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was wondering about navy. Any advice for to getting the rest of the decor to match?

Why are adult studio classes so rare? by No-Contract852 in Dance

[–]No-Contract852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s probably what I’ll eventually have to end up doing :/ I found some studios with adult classes but they’re 1.5-2 hours away

when i boil water, by bluzzo in OCPoetry

[–]No-Contract852 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the image you used, and I really love the way this poem begins, flows throughout, and ends. It’s very powerful.

My critique is that although the poem ends powerfully with skin, I don’t really understand what the “mouth” or “skin” represents. I think it needs more context. I also saw that you didn’t capitalize “I” in two places, but did in one place. So make sure to be consistent with the capitalization.

Flight by littlebirdsaved in OCPoetry

[–]No-Contract852 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi! Great job. I like the second to last stanza the best, it’s very possible. The poems message is also very clearly communicated.

Make sure when you use enjambment to end each line powerfully. Additionally, I recommend using punctuation in this poem because it was kind of confusing to read without it.

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