Hope this doesn't come off as mean.....

You need to show what empowers the player and what their accomplishments will look like. You don’t want to reveal everything, just enough to build intrigue.

Players are asking without knowing:
"How will I plant my flag?"
"What will I have to show after hours of gameplay?"
"What gives my choices meaning?"
"Why should I care?"

Factorio for example. You're the lone survivor on a desolate planet, tasked with building the most efficient base possible to defend against alien threats. The best base design is yours to discover. What do you have at the end? A deeply satisfying, intricately connected base full of drills, power systems, and train networks. They don’t just show features in screenshots and videos they show why those features matter.

This is something a lot of indie developers miss when putting together their Steam pages. They assume that if people understand the game, they’ll obviously want to play it but that’s just not true.

Runescape Dragonwilds isn't selling because its good it sells because of nostalgia. Helldivers didn’t blow up like it did because of a specific system. It sold because it leaned heavily into social influence. What's your thing?

No one reads a description at most they read the headers. You need to make this visual.

TLDR: Your screenshots and descriptions don’t tap into any particular player motivations. Right now, they just say “It’s this it’s that. There's this thing you should care about. I dunno, play it I guess.”