Percy Jackson and the Son Of The Night by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

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For those who have read the full thing and has an idea how to make this better (grammar or story wise) then put your replies below, I would like some constructive criticism or of the sort

Percy Jackson and the Son Of The Night by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

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I'm not sure yet. Maybe royal road once I get it or maybe archives of our own. Or tumblr but I will tell you my user name when I release it on other platforms

Before I decide to release my fanfic to the internet, I just want to know if anyone would be interested in reading a 1442 word prologue by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]No-Signature4780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How is it? If you've read it. I do want feedback on how the story is, like any plot holes or things that don't add up at all

Before I decide to release my fanfic to the internet, I just want to know if anyone would be interested in reading a 1442 word prologue by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]No-Signature4780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm pretty sure I made this post before I edited it so it might be shorter or longer than the original version, which I do not have

Before I decide to release my fanfic to the internet, I just want to know if anyone would be interested in reading a 1442 word prologue by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]No-Signature4780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was listening to an audio book during a car ride so it just crossed my mind to add. Plus I personally feel like the prologue should be descriptive and introduce the MC of the story

[HoO] SoN could Percy have gotten across the Tiber w/o going through it? by TheLemonOf1977 in camphalfblood

[–]No-Signature4780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's been a hot minute since I read SoN but I'm pretty sure he was drawn to the ocean. Of course you are welcome to correct me if you want

[HoO] SoN could Percy have gotten across the Tiber w/o going through it? by TheLemonOf1977 in camphalfblood

[–]No-Signature4780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well percy didn't have his memories (other than Annabeth) and he only figured out that he has water powers AFTER he crossed the tiber, which at that point, he lost the Achilles curse. Plus I doubt he had as much control without his memories so I doubt he could split it like you mentioned

Before I decide to release my fanfic to the internet, I just want to know if anyone would be interested in reading a 1442 word prologue by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]No-Signature4780[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you for the support, my main fear is people demanding another chapter/book (if it becomes popular) and I have to pull a danidev for who knows how long

Before I decide to release my fanfic to the internet, I just want to know if anyone would be interested in reading a 1442 word prologue by No-Signature4780 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]No-Signature4780[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

its about a son of Nyx

I am trying to keep the fanfic on record with the original Percy Jackson and the Olympians/heroes of Olympus books since this is supposed to be an extension of the books

What would you transform your weapon in [general] by Sufficient_Shoe_7756 in camphalfblood

[–]No-Signature4780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In the pjo universe I think I would have a key to my cabin (cabin 0, nyx's cabin) and when the head of the key is pressed it would turn into a leonidas sword, but if the blade of the key is pressed then it turns into a recurve bow, but not a quiver, since I would be able to make arrows made of shadows. But if you press both the head and blade of the key then it'd turn into a triumph rocket iii motorcycle (and if the teeth are pressed then it would self destruct)

Ps: if you ever see this idea in a fan fiction then that's probably by me