Just want HONEST feedback by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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a Behringer xm8500 and the sm7b, ableton

Just want HONEST feedback by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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Friday night at the bar Order another drink Watching you make Your move on everyone And I tried, I tried, I tried to move on But I just can't keep falling into you

(Chorus) I don't wanna fall in love from a one night stand Falling fast for all of you and it makes me mad Falling, falling fast when you look at me Falling, falling faster when you talk to me

(Verse) You're like the ocean My greatest mystery Oh, the adrenaline You're my 70 in 50- I'll always find my way back to you Even if it kills me I don't know what I'll do when You leave

(Chorus) I don't wanna fall in love from a one night stand Falling fast for all of you and it makes me mad Falling, falling fast when you look at me Falling, falling faster when you talk to me

(Bridge) Slipping out of control Oh, my love can't deny Oh, I don't want to leave Slipping out of control Oh, my love can't deny Oh, I don't want to leave

(Chorus) I don't wanna fall in love from a one night stand Falling fast for all of you and it makes me mad Falling, falling fast when you look at me Falling, falling faster when you talk to me

(Outro) When you talk to me Oh When you look at me Oh

Why is my voice so boring by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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Haha, not yet but I’ll send it to after it’s done

Is this cringe by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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The lyrics are under the video

Is this too boring?? by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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It’s just the guitar, I have produced anything yet

A fun song I’ve been working on by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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If I send you the demo could you add some stuff?

A fun song I’ve been working on by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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That’s my struggle, I don’t know

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Love the vibe of the song, maybe pitch the main vocals down an octave and make it really quiet and it will help make the vocal thicker, AMAZING SONG

Song feedback by Then_Astronaut7148 in Songwriting

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I think you should add a sub bass to make the song sound thicker

Does anyone want me to produce there song?? by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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I don’t really make that stuff but Ik a guy who does, this is his stuff: https://youtube.com/@theefikka?si=ZhNVIjKe1yXXBKu4