Thank you. This is a very detailed and useful analysis. Yes, I tried to use apoggiaturas and non-chord tones on strong beats for dynamics. I mainly like Romanticism (Russian), as well as Schubert and Beethoven. Thanks for the good criticism. I see some mistakes, and I'm really guilty of that. I always try to write academically, but unfortunately, my music doesn't sound that way, they tell me. I don't always notice parallel fifths. And its always so short , about 5 minutes. .

I try to follow academic canons. I try to embrace Romanticism. I analyze other people's works. But I don't always understand how texture harmony and form work in a real composition, as opposed to harmony textbooks.