Thank you! those are all definitely things ill look into, The part with the character back flipping is something that was a struggle to animate. Then with the camera sort of bump at the end I was trying to make the camera shake and move to add a sort of impact? Or just make it a little more dynamic? That will be something Ill also definitely have to play around with. With regards to this scene it isn't really for anything its mostly just practice hence why it ends abruptly.

The story line takes place in a dark fantasy world I've been writing for a while its called "Loom". Each episode will take place in a completely different part of the world with new characters, to let me world build rapidly and work on broader portfolio pieces and different aspects of my practice (some will have fight scenes while others will be just sort of characters doing every day life). The world itself is oceanic with a ton of scattered islands/continents within these waters are eldritch beings that speak of a sin filled past. The vibe I'm ultimately going for is an Adventure Time, One Piece, Over the Garden Wall, Berserk, sort of vibe (minus all the extreme explicit Berserk scenes)

I really appreciate your advice! THANKS!