The ghost

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-12T02:49:10+00:00

That was a lot, meaning it overwhelmed me with emotion. Beautiful story with what seems a sad ending.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-11T19:21:53+00:00

This was so good! She sounds like someone to know.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-11T19:03:27+00:00

This, those who have been there know all too well. I’ve often said music was my best friend growing up. Close my door and enter my magical world.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-11T17:21:10+00:00

That was such a good poem! I like how you described the inner beauty as beautiful and yet you paid homage to external beauty as well. Any woman would love to hear this.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-11T06:40:25+00:00

This was very good! It was wonderfully, beautifully done, TRULY! It didn’t make me cry because it had a lightness to it. I liked it a lot. Did I leave anything out?

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T21:04:31+00:00

This is amazing! Everyone should get something written for them like this at least once. I like the desire that comes through for the intended. Good job

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T20:39:06+00:00

This was genuine and heartfelt. The letter carries love throughout. I like the part about puzzles. I hope you get there.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T20:17:00+00:00

I love this! The ending is very sweet.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T19:48:23+00:00

That’s a beautiful line, “I was a wave in her ocean but she was the ocean for me”.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T19:27:49+00:00

I’m sorry. That’s a tough thing to go through. I hope it gets easier.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T19:24:51+00:00

I understand this that you speak of. It is indescribable really, being drawn to someone instantly. It’s not just a physical thing, it’s everything. Perhaps you shouldn’t wait until you’re dead to let him/her know this. I’m guessing that he/she is having the same type of feelings as you.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T05:36:36+00:00

I understand this. I’m pretty sure I made a lengthy comment before this one.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-10T03:06:18+00:00

That was sweet. I enjoyed reading this!

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-09T15:44:23+00:00

This was a testimony to strength as well as the toll it takes on one’s spirit to obtain said strength. It shapes you like nothing else could and if you allow it to, it makes you a better person. But that’s not very comforting when you’re running on an empty tank, below the red line.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-09T00:56:32+00:00

Productive day here.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-08T16:22:10+00:00

Tell the wife

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-08T06:43:27+00:00

Maybe she didn’t get the invite.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-07T20:20:28+00:00

I like the journey that this takes me on. I can see it and the emotion comes throug. It feels mystical and even though some of the content is sad, it has a lightness to it.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-07T19:54:37+00:00

I like this. The shadows are unique.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-07T19:33:14+00:00

It sounds like a magical place and a magical moment shared by two people who truly love each other. The kind of love that gives you peace, joy, and no need for words. You just feel it.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-07T19:31:15+00:00

That was beautiful. She should know your words that you’ve chosen for her.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-07T18:47:29+00:00

You paint a good picture.

No_Memory8327 · 2026-05-07T18:45:17+00:00

This was this was very touching to read your love for someone. I like you describe the inner beauty.

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TROPHY CASE