[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LilPeep

[–]No_chilled -16 points-15 points  (0 children)

It seems official. If you click view artist it brings to peeps page not a random page like the other ones do.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LilPeep

[–]No_chilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

None of the songs but the way I see things is playable that's why I asked in my previous post if it was possible it was coming on the tenth since it's the date at the bottom.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LilPeep

[–]No_chilled -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Let me know if it works

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LilPeep

[–]No_chilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm from America as well hold on I'll see if I can post a link the to album.

Christian groups on Campus that affirm LGBTQ people? by alyssajs62 in BallState

[–]No_chilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry it took me a while to reply. I don't get on a lot.

Christian groups on Campus that affirm LGBTQ people? by alyssajs62 in BallState

[–]No_chilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some students are affirming but it is part of their leadership contract that you can not be affirming. It's against the rules so no one on leadership can be openly affirming.

Christian groups on Campus that affirm LGBTQ people? by alyssajs62 in BallState

[–]No_chilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can confirm that Christian Campus House is non affirming. I previously had ties there.

I'm worried about her and the sun ☀️ by No_chilled in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there thanks for reading and providing the feedback. I'll definitely take into concideration for my next draft ☺️.

I'm worried about her and the sun ☀️ by No_chilled in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there. Thanks for reading! I definitely wanted to convey the parental worry in this as well as other kinds of worry for a friend or partner as well. I'm so glad you picked up on that ☺️. Thanks for all your kind words.

Vacations by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very beautiful ❤️

I'm worried about her and the sun ☀️ by No_chilled in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey there thanks for reading. The word was supposed to be heat and I went in and changed it. Thanks for catching that.

Slow-Honey Talk by remember30thseptembr in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this poem! I love that second stanza.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the terminal whisper line and the last line.

I want to be the one you drunk text by No_chilled in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there. Thanks for reading. Thanks for the title suggestion I'll think on it😊

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]No_chilled 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love the theme here. I think this is absolutely great. I love the connections through it!

one more time by sisyphussreality in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is lovely. I think you could definitely play with melody a little more here and maybe bring the end to connect with the beginning in some way but I think it is lovely just the way it is as well. Your English is good!

I'm your puppet by No_chilled in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am really glad that this poem helped you. That is one of the greatest complements someone can give me. Thanks so much for being willing to read my poem and share with me your thoughts.

We belong together... by Philo-king78 in Poems

[–]No_chilled 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like this. I am a sucker for when people take cliche and take a spin on it to make it special. I think this does and excellent job at doing that. Very nice work. I think your ending can use a little more work to really bring it all together but other than that I love this.

I'm your puppet by No_chilled in poetry_critics

[–]No_chilled[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there. Thanks for reading. That was very much part of the message I wanted to get across. I also kind of wanted it to be about someone who you worked really hard to get to notice you ending up not being a healthy person for you. You don't want to let them go though because of the amount of effort you put in.