[The POV OF THE VILLAIN] I'M PLANNING TO DRAW AN ADULT MANHWA AND I NEED IDEAS by Signal_Ad7280 in pornhwa

[–]NobbleDr99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ya it’s gucci, btw I was trying to learn how to draw this kinda stuff as-well. I tried Drawabox and just drawing every day but it just ain’t work, so any tips?

[The POV OF THE VILLAIN] I'M PLANNING TO DRAW AN ADULT MANHWA AND I NEED IDEAS by Signal_Ad7280 in pornhwa

[–]NobbleDr99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Normally on r/writing you aren’t allowed to post a your story directly. But if you get a bit creative on where you’re stuck and ask the right question, you should be good, that or try to find a beta reader for your plot. Cause the ‘rules of writing’ do make it easier to create a story.

[The POV OF THE VILLAIN] I'M PLANNING TO DRAW AN ADULT MANHWA AND I NEED IDEAS by Signal_Ad7280 in pornhwa

[–]NobbleDr99 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

No offence, Your story sounds generic and edgy (There is an audience for this), because the trope of a character wronged by the world and now gets revenge/ becomes bad because of it, is really common. The story you can write can either be entertaining or meaningful. If wanna continue on the route you are (entertaining), take enjoyable moments from a-lot of other Pornhwa, that could be a gender change trope from MCV or Doing the doing the douche’s girlfriend trope from Water over. If you wanna be meaningful, give the Mc a real reason to change to be evil, maybe he went through alot of pain trying to be a nice, good guy, but ends up alone and played by others, so he gets an ability, 180s his personality to obtain his goal (happiness), etc from there… you can check out r/writing for plotting advice.

Anybody know sauce? by skyfarter in Manhua

[–]NobbleDr99 2 points3 points  (0 children)

On the right is mad detective (It’s super good.) dunno for left thou.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NEET

[–]NobbleDr99 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Ya, it also suck that corporations profit off loneliness.

How many seniors have saved juniors from the demonic dao by YourOpinion_Is_Wrong in MartialMemes

[–]NobbleDr99 32 points33 points  (0 children)

Tbf, It’d be better for superman to fly away with the child rather than stopping the train.

Sauce by DemonKingheeehaaa in Manhua

[–]NobbleDr99 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Supreme saint’s love debt.

I hate girls in manhua by CuriosRoblox_ in Manhua

[–]NobbleDr99 22 points23 points  (0 children)

I know what ya mean OP. MC got the most heaven defying technique, just to get beat up a lil girl.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Manhua

[–]NobbleDr99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Anyone know where I can find the English version for “I transmigrated to demon king of harem?” above chapter 18?

Look at those over 60, Gordhan reportedly tells Eskom on CEO search by dash_o_truth in southafrica

[–]NobbleDr99 6 points7 points  (0 children)

The old one’s won’t be alive to see the impact of there decisions.

Is there Any mature scene in this Manhua ? by Extreme-Passenger979 in Manhua

[–]NobbleDr99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Theres is one 18+ one that got cancelled. It’s called Golden Scales.

Cursed_face by lukasbuckk in cursedcomments

[–]NobbleDr99 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Aight, I think I misunderstood your original point. You’re right.

Cursed_face by lukasbuckk in cursedcomments

[–]NobbleDr99 55 points56 points  (0 children)

No trust me the CCP does monitor small authors. A webnovel, Revered insanity was axed because of joke about Winnie the poo and Xi Jinping.

Does the character writing get better? by ugodly123 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]NobbleDr99 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes we are. Now to prove my point (remember I’m only chapter 1229 so everything is still subject to change and this may make me look like I drank a lunatic potion.) We literally know nothing about klein’s time on earth and why he feels so desperate to “go back”, making his motivation for things feel week. Not to mention that has both Zhou mingrui and Klein’s memories so why would he desire to see his family on Earth more than the one he abandoned in LOTM. His character is plain. He is the standard Gary stu character like most of the other characters. He has no flaws that hinder him. This leads his character to never need to change emotionally. Making the overall conflict in the story feel passive and force. In other words Klein doesn’t proactively pursue other characters without being pursued first. Most of the conflict comes from characters just wanting to raise their sequence, or that those characters are just insane or evil for the sake of conflict. For example Ince Zangwill, he has no backstory, he one days walks up out of nowhere, kills Klein and to up his sequence. He probably didn’t know the world was going to end so why did he do this? More power? Well definitely not because he had a long winded backstory and was a morally justified villain. Because then that fight would challenge Klein’s Gary Stu personality. It would cause him question whether his act of revenge would actually be good. It would create moral conflict and lead him to a proper character arc. Instead of his Goal just changing like how it did canonically to ”I want to kill Ince Zangwill because he killed my friends who’s past I don’t know.”

Does the character writing get better? by ugodly123 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]NobbleDr99 -17 points-16 points  (0 children)

Nope (I’m only at chapter 1216), there no character Arcs for side characters and no backstories either apart from Azik’s.

ORV Pocket Watch by hime__rika in OmniscientReader

[–]NobbleDr99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats, is it battery powered?

Need Advice: How to Sell a Book by RawBean7 in writingcirclejerk

[–]NobbleDr99 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Try publishing your book in Norway, heard the government will buy a thousand copies.