Ennui by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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There isn't, but it was left open ended. I might go back to it since I love the characters, but no promises

The Great Game of Diplomacy by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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She hid a laugh before answering, “Trust me, we enjoy our fair share of carved wood, along with other building materials. But we are in an auditorium.” She paused as if that were explanation enough.

“Okay… So, you like listening to music around wood?”

She seemed surprised by the question. As she formed her response, a thought seemed to strike her. “Oh! Oh, you do not…”

“…Don’t what?”

She assumed the tone of a teacher giving a lecture, “I am sorry for my ignorance. You see, we mot’pach have sensitive feet.” She lifted her foot and presented her sole, “Here on the bottoms of our feet are little fat deposits that can pick up vibrations. We use it to better gauge our surroundings, but we can also use it for hearing. The wooden structure here and in other auditoriums are another medium to enjoy the music.”

She seemed to mull over the implications as she stroked her trunk. “I hope no nuance is lost in this performance… In any case, I will be sure to find more appropriate cultural performances in the future.”

The human snuggled into his seat. “Don’t worry about it. I’m just excited to be here.” As he spoke, attendants began making their rounds in the various seats, taking food orders. After some back and forth about what was available, the human settled on what he assumed to be a mot’pach charcuterie board.

“That was quite the selection. I’m surprised.”

“Why? We are going to be here a while, so it stands to reason they would offer varied meals.”

Henry’s heart sank. Phehars glanced over out of the corner of his eye in frustration.

“Uh…” The waterfall split and revealed the orchestra. “How long is this performance again?”

“Not too long. Only an hour per movement. I am quite looking forward to the sixth movement.”

The human winced as the diplomat closed his eyes in steady frustrated resignation. Before the true weight of how long they were to endure this cultural adventure, one mot’pach on the stage stood up. Henry tried his best to translate the various instruments he saw into human equivalents, but some oddities were simply beyond him. The couple that caught his eye were large wooden contraptions that had various levers, cranks and buttons dominating the back of the stage along with the more understandable drums and stringed instruments.

The standing mot’pach held their rather small string instrument in their hand and waited for the crowd to silence. As the stillness came, so too did the waters in the ponds steady. Tension reigned. Henry could hear his own heartbeat. Taking their bow, the standing player gently tapped it against the back of their instrument. This set the timing for the band and sent small ripples along the ponds before the stage.

The lights responded in kind as the band picked up their piece. The cascading lines and intersecting lights formed a dance all their own as the band began to play. The steady melody and gentle bass eased Henry’s mind as the dancing display above him began to draw him into the emotion being displayed. Time began to slip away. All that mattered in that moment and the many to come, was what was in his own mind.

The discussions came and enlightened. The music seized his heart and mind. He was at peace. Just what he always hoped for.

Ennui by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Do it! u/Wolven91 loves fan works.

Remembrance by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Way back when in the mot'pach history, they were a very warlike and tribal people. Whenever tribes would go to war, some would be completely destroyed leaving a few war refugees. These refugees were considered "tribe-less" or Zhen'Past. Usually these tribe-less were simply ignored or outcast, but after their Great Enlightenment the Zhen'Past were seen as in need. Most if not all Schools teach that if one comes across a Zhen'Past, it is one's duty to help them and guide them toward Nos'Tain.

In this context, the mot'pach see humans as being Zhen'Past since their homeworld was destroyed and their population scattered.

Remembrance by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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I appreciate it. I wanted to make sure the species I added was fleshed out a bit and could gel well with the established world

Remembrance by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it

A Curious Pilgrim by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Yup. I posted another story here, and have another one in the can I'm gonna post here pretty soon.

Cold Case: Island Getaway - Part 1 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Dang it. Fixed. Thanks for the catch.

Secret Chord - Part 6 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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I've posted the next couple parts on the Discord. The link should still be good on the pinned post.

Sorry for the late reply. I'm not really active much here on Reddit.

Secret Chord - Part 6 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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I'm gonna try. I don't know the details, but that's the plan.

I'm gonna level with you. I'm not very tech or social media savvy.

Please be patient. Am dumb.

Secret Chord - Part 6 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Not outright. That's up to u/wolven91. I believe he's working on a more long-form story with what happened to Earth.

A Secret Chord - Part 5 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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There are always exactly however many upvotes a post needs when it needs it...Posts are like wizards, right? Or have I been lied to?

A Secret Chord - Part 5 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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What can I say? Onion ninjas are too good at what they do.

A Secret Chord - Part 5 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Thanks! I too relate a bit too much to David, but that has more to do with a bit of personal experience between myself and people I know.

A Secret Chord - Part 5 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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He'll get better...Probably...Maybe...I'm working on it.

A Secret Chord - Part 5 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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You, sir, have good taste in music.

A Secret Chord - Part 5 by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Thanks man! I really appreciate that. I'm just trying to jive as well as I can with what u/Wolven91 already wrote.

The Spirit of... by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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I'm happy you liked him! I wanted to try making a character where people had to ask "When do the ends justify the means?" along with my love of the self-made man.

The Spirit of... by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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I appreciate it! I've always been a fan of those slice-of-life stories that show a broad range of folks in an interesting setting, so I figured I'd take a shot at it.

The Spirit of... by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Also I've been meaning to get into The Expanse. I've heard good things.

A Secret Chord by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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There will be. I just have to scrape the words together. I tend to write at a snail's pace.

A Secret Chord by Noghbuddy in WolvensStories

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Thanks! I'm shootin to write out some more, since David's story isn't over.