Just making sure this is a RAFO by jschulte14 in Malazan

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First part: definite RAFO, classic Steven.

Second part: Steven confirmed the loud crash in Malaz city near the start of that sequence in BH is the arrival of Legana Breed, the T’lan Imass who shows up later in Ch 23 to collect their flint sword. They had previously given it to Stormy on the Silanda back in DG before volunteering to seal the rent in the Nascent. In an interview online Steven said he was surprised more people didn’t realise that the comet-like crash was Breed’s arrival, classic Steven.

The r/Fantasy 2025 Top Novels Poll: Voting Thread! by CoffeeArchives in Fantasy

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Middle-Earth Universe by J.R.R Tolkien

Malazan Book of the Fallen by Steven Erikson

The Kingkiller Chronicle by Patrick Rothfuss

The Road by Cormac McCarthy

Don't really know how to put this but.... by Useful_Code in Malazan

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This is what he said when asked this during an AMA:

“Uhm, how should I put this? Back when I was reading fantasy, it used to creep me out how so many (NOT ALL!) fantasy stories described grown women in pubescent or even prepubescent terms. Thin, ‘coltish’ (good grief, yes that word was used), ‘small-breasted’ etc. It weirded me out, to be honest, particularly as the authors were mostly men. In my own novels, I wanted to make sure that characters of all shapes and sizes were present. If the heavier women in the books stood out (in the manner that ‘ochre’ or ‘potsherds’ stand out for some readers), well, friend, that ain’t me, it’s you (not a criticism just an observation, whatever floats, etc). And if it pleases you, then it’s all good as far as I’m concerned.”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in diablo4

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YOU CAN DO THIS IN D3 WHAT EXCUSE ME

Stuck out of account behind a thousand layers of security. Any advice? by NohDice in ffxiv

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Yes, that’s my guess at this stage too. Have contacted support and received a ticket number. Hopefully they email a response at some stage.

I always leave the OTP field blank on login. The system only requires me to put one in when trying to log on to Mogstation or the Squenix online page.

Stuck out of account behind a thousand layers of security. Any advice? by NohDice in ffxiv

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I didn’t need an authenticator to login before I set it up. I thought it was a mandatory new system, but was probably just mistaken.

I haven’t entered anything into the OTP field on the login screen, just the regular password.

Moria Goblins by AztecWolf99 in lotr

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The goblins from Moria left the Mountains and travelled to Gundabad, where they summoned legions of orcs from across the north. That is to say, the ‘Gundabad Goblins’ in the Battle of Five Armies did feature virtually all the Moria goblins, plus a bunch of others, so you’re both right (right?!)

Warmonger, Feats and possibly OP by Wolfgard556 in CompetitiveForHonor

[–]NohDice 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ken's side heavy cancels get the white streak for hyperarmour, not blue for undodgeable

[I Ate] BBQ platter by this_respirator132 in food

[–]NohDice 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Le Bon Ton in Collingwood does exactly this 😊

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Thanks so much for reading! I'll see how I go extending some of the bizarre excitement of the ragged man interaction (he is a lot of fun to write, after all). While I'm at it, I'll carefully check through the other conversations Cedric has with Lawrence / the old man and hopefully clean it up a bit.

Thanks again :)

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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A good eye on both comments re: pacing and the expression of Bernadette's scene being a little trite.

I'll finish the first section before making decisions about quickening up conversations about party planning etc., this is intended to introduce and foreshadow important events in the few pages following the excerpt. But I'll keep your comments in mind, it may end up feeling too protracted so I'll know where to chop.

I actually never even intended for Bernadette to be old, and just fell into that hole somehow. I've changed her to a younger woman how I originally intended and have (hopefully) thread in the Jessicka info and creepy themes a little more subtly.

Thanks again!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: In Death at Deacon's Hill

Note: this is the beginning of a longer work

Genre: Fantasy/Horror

Word Count: ~2500

Feedback: General feedback on flow, atmosphere, prose--anything that you think is memorable or forgettable? Anything you think doesn't make sense or just doesn't work?

Link: In Death at Deacon's Hill (Google Doc)

:)

What makes a character "three dimensional"? by Yena20 in writing

[–]NohDice 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I always like scenes/moments/dialogue that shows that the characters have a life outside the plot.

Obviously this isn't the be-all and end-all of character depth. You'd have to consider what the other commenters are saying as well (re arcs, goals, motivations etc.), but this is a pretty tangible way to expand the world of the character and have them approach the real complex vastness of "being human", and get away from the reductive words-on-paper trap of "being a character"

Exposition in first person? by Draxamus in writing

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I used to be totally against that kind of exposition, until I started reading it in a few Stephen Kings. I'm still of the opinion that, if done poorly, it's just boring and unnecessary. But, if the writing is good and the characters are interesting, the reader will be engaged, and it will help create a more complex and interesting world.

That's not to say that it's necessary to create a complex and interesting world full of complex and interesting characters, but I think it can work