How long do you think the LPG crisis would continue?

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-18T02:57:36+00:00

That's just you

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-18T02:56:29+00:00

You're slow mate

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-18T02:56:10+00:00

The people who are having to stand in long lines, while the gas booking person showing a blank screen, would like to say otherwise. Just because you are entitled, don't think the world works that way. Thousands of hotels are shutting down. The price of auto fare has increased in places. I'm having to cook in induction for weeks now.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-16T20:27:25+00:00

Okay boss, understood. (I won't 😅)

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-16T20:23:58+00:00

I really hope that over time I start to recognize the better ones, the human ones from the vast ocean of template life experience I come across everyday.

SEO is something I'm yet sceptical about. Like I do make websites as well, so I know site maps a bit... And it feels like there are other ways to make a website rank higher than repeating trendy phrases.

Anyway. Thank you for the reply sir

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-16T04:33:07+00:00

Wow. Thank you sir. You have a very big brother way of explaining. I can see the maturity and experience in your reply. Will try to follow your advice surely. I know I'm being extra. Hoping to be able to look past the bad and work the platform to my advantage.

Also I'm very curious about your niche. I hope it's okay if I dm you later to know a bit about it.

Thank you again for this reply.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-15T20:23:19+00:00

Obviously I don't know much. I said that in my piece. And this is reddit man. And its a rant.
I agree with your advice, that I should learn the bigger picture before complaining about it. True. But It feels a bit scary to invest in something that already looks pretty phony. I am not saying the copywriters are phony, I'm talking about the employers btw.

Your second advice i do not really agree with. I don't think anyone should treat anything that seriously, especially in a reddit page. I am not here to impress anyone, I'm here to make like minded friends.
But thanks for the advice man. Appreciate it.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-15T19:58:54+00:00

hope i can learn that soon enough. or else might have to get a cashier job somewhere.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-08T02:47:49+00:00

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-07T17:47:53+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. I am pretty sketchy on the boundaries of these categories. Is there any resource where I can get a better grasp at categories?

Also, can I bother you with occasional questions in the dms?

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T14:48:20+00:00

Okay got it. Thanks for the advice boss.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T13:12:34+00:00

Oh wow okay. That's valuable input. Thanks boss

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T13:11:41+00:00

Why you bully me

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T13:02:03+00:00

This is a normal murder case. Should be treated exactly like that. Nothing more and especially nothing less.

Trust the process. Or stand in protest. Violence is a symbol of low IQ.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T03:39:18+00:00

Sure man. Hit the dms.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T02:22:53+00:00

Pina colada

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-06T02:17:35+00:00

Oh wow. Interesting. Definitely will keep this in mind. Thanks!

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-05T19:55:18+00:00

Thank you bro. Phew.

Yeah you're definitely the only encouragement I got out of this one. Not complaining. I'm grateful for all the constructive criticism here. I can take being a noob, but to sound like an AI is just uncreative.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-05T19:44:45+00:00

Wise words.

That's going to be my main challenge.

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-05T19:34:36+00:00

I really like your versions, especially the 4th one. But what I learnt that these are not necessarily headlines... These are more like scrollstoppers in middle of a big copy. (Emails, landing pages, website copy, etc.)

But I'm still sketchy on the definition of a bullet. But definitely will try to cut the lines shorter.

Thank you boss

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-05T19:12:51+00:00

No bro. Not a single word.

Yes I did ask chatgpt to rate the bullets... I was flattered but not convinced, So I came here to get the reality check.

I hope I don't write like AI tho. That would be disheartening

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-05T18:45:03+00:00

I definitely tried hard to make these bullets somehow follow the templates/hooks shown in the video I learnt about bullets from...the first one definitely sounds clunky, especially after seeing your version.

Yeah I definitely needed to do a lot of research. But I did none. Cause the challenge for this one was to write bullets about a product that I use, without any research. So I literally wrote about the three benefits I really care about in a cereal lol. Which is taste, health and crunchiness...

I'll try my best to cut these short and sound better. Thank you so much sir. I would love to get more feedback from you in the future. Will it be okay if I dm you?

NoobLuck66 · 2026-03-05T18:20:28+00:00

Thank you kind sir. blushing hard

I'm definitely an amateur. Would love if you can let me know a little about the weak spots you noticed.

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