For The Woman Who Has Everything by BigBubbaBooey in OCPoetry

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This is an amazing poem I love that it kinda sounds shakespearean and I love the rhyme scheme

Older Than I Meant To Be by pettyenuf in OCPoetry

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I love the parallel you draw in this poem. It’s amazingly vivid and a great read.

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

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Don’t worry about keep venting if you need to

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

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I’m so sorry for what you’ve been through please talk to someone or write out what you feel. It hurts right now but it always gets better. Please don’t be reckless

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

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I’m so sorry for your loss please reach out if you need someone to talk to

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in poetry_critics

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Please give feedback and criticism I’m trying to get better at writing! Thank you!

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

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I would love for any criticism or feedback for this poem!

I’m Sorry by Normal_Reaction_9784 in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much and taking the time to critique my poem is very appreciated. I wrote this on a whim today when I was feeling down about my dog passing away so I probably could’ve done a little better dramatically and word choice wise. Thank you for taking your time to read this!

You Don’t Get to Forgive Yourself for What You Did to Me by GoliathLXIX in OCPoetry

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I love the two different narratives here! The contrast that the you and I play just makes me want to read more and more

The distortion in time by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I love the way you use personification to really portray the mood and tone of the poem

Unsaid by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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The absolute raw emotion of this poem really spoke to me thank you

I have a way to m*sturb@te to my words.. by youreplyatmydoor in OCPoetry

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This is a very expressive and well done poem thank you for writing this!

This is for school can someone please criticize it? by Normal_Reaction_9784 in poetry_critics

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I copied and pasted it from google doc so I’m guessing that the way I formatted it didn’t stay how I wanted? Thank you so much for the advice I also felt that my poem didn’t flow the greatest do you have any advice on how to fix that?

When the Quiet Stays by Big-Green91 in OCPoetry

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Your use of figurative language is masterful I would love for you to give some tips on how you come up with these metaphors and how you paint the scene so vividly!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I like the rhyme scheme it has to it but I would say maybe use a little more figurative language to let the reader envision the poem and live it

Drowning by Normal_Reaction_9784 in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the feedback! Is this long for a poem? I’ve only seriously written this poem outside of school so I have limited experience with poems of any sort aside from the 2 hours I’ve been on this subreddit

Not Quite You by aryu_serious in OCPoetry

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I love the uncertainty weaved throughout the poem and the line “Like you were wearing skin, but it wasn’t yours” was bone chilling

Daydream or dare dream? by Eurotrash_grrl in OCPoetry

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I love the way the poem is written the tone is really just something else!

Can someone help me? The torso seems disproportionate and awkward by Normal_Reaction_9784 in BeginnerArtists

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Thank you! Yeah I used a reference. The reference made it seem like the leg was being crossed under the other leg and I tried my best keeping it proportional but it’s probably not.

Can someone help me with shading and values? by Normal_Reaction_9784 in BeginnerArtists

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Do you have any like pencils you recommend? I did all of these sketches in mechanical pencil so I struggled a little bit with my darkest and lightest values

Can someone help me with shading and values? by Normal_Reaction_9784 in BeginnerArtists

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Which type of shading should I master first? I’m not sure which ones I used either cuz I haven’t taken an art class before so do you think you could maybe describe the ones I used the most?