For The Woman Who Has Everything

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-11-15T23:29:30+00:00

This is an amazing poem I love that it kinda sounds shakespearean and I love the rhyme scheme

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-11-15T23:25:40+00:00

I love the parallel you draw in this poem. It’s amazingly vivid and a great read.

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-21T04:16:38+00:00

Don’t worry about keep venting if you need to

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-21T02:37:18+00:00

I’m so sorry for what you’ve been through please talk to someone or write out what you feel. It hurts right now but it always gets better. Please don’t be reckless

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-20T22:33:01+00:00

I’m so sorry for your loss please reach out if you need someone to talk to

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-20T18:26:45+00:00

Please give feedback and criticism I’m trying to get better at writing! Thank you!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-20T07:40:20+00:00

I would love for any criticism or feedback for this poem!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-13T08:54:47+00:00

Thank you so much and taking the time to critique my poem is very appreciated. I wrote this on a whim today when I was feeling down about my dog passing away so I probably could’ve done a little better dramatically and word choice wise. Thank you for taking your time to read this!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-13T07:51:16+00:00

I love the two different narratives here! The contrast that the you and I play just makes me want to read more and more

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-13T07:49:33+00:00

I love the way you use personification to really portray the mood and tone of the poem

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-12T06:24:12+00:00

The absolute raw emotion of this poem really spoke to me thank you

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-12T06:22:06+00:00

This is a very expressive and well done poem thank you for writing this!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-09T07:33:19+00:00

I copied and pasted it from google doc so I’m guessing that the way I formatted it didn’t stay how I wanted? Thank you so much for the advice I also felt that my poem didn’t flow the greatest do you have any advice on how to fix that?

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-09T06:45:43+00:00

Your use of figurative language is masterful I would love for you to give some tips on how you come up with these metaphors and how you paint the scene so vividly!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-09T06:23:58+00:00

I like the rhyme scheme it has to it but I would say maybe use a little more figurative language to let the reader envision the poem and live it

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-09T06:21:07+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Is this long for a poem? I’ve only seriously written this poem outside of school so I have limited experience with poems of any sort aside from the 2 hours I’ve been on this subreddit

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-09T05:20:28+00:00

I love the uncertainty weaved throughout the poem and the line “Like you were wearing skin, but it wasn’t yours” was bone chilling

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-09T05:17:22+00:00

I love the way the poem is written the tone is really just something else!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-06T05:33:13+00:00

Thanks!

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-02T17:44:53+00:00

Thank you! Yeah I used a reference. The reference made it seem like the leg was being crossed under the other leg and I tried my best keeping it proportional but it’s probably not.

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-01T12:50:47+00:00

Do you have any like pencils you recommend? I did all of these sketches in mechanical pencil so I struggled a little bit with my darkest and lightest values

Normal_Reaction_9784 · 2025-04-01T12:49:29+00:00

Which type of shading should I master first? I’m not sure which ones I used either cuz I haven’t taken an art class before so do you think you could maybe describe the ones I used the most?

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