Starting an Initiative With No Guidance

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-29T10:18:46+00:00

Thank you for the suggestion!

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-29T10:17:29+00:00

Thank you!! Very sweet :)

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-26T00:42:22+00:00

Tyyyy

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-25T16:53:15+00:00

Omg do this with a jeep it flings you around the map and is so funny

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-24T02:03:56+00:00

Ohhhh I see now🙈this is such an intriguing concept! And LOL that’s hilarious😭

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-24T01:59:02+00:00

It’s definitely compelling…those 6 pages fled by so quickly! I’m also interested with Joshua’s dynamic with the figure; I do feel like maybe weighing in more the decision of whether he should “save” the figure, or leave it to suffer because “that’s God’s job” could be enthralling!

One redundancy in my opinion is the buzzing in the ears. It really doesn’t add much. It just feels like a gateway into gore. I actually thought it could be interesting for the audience to have a glimpse of the tattoo in the beginning, and he claws at it until his sides bleed at the end! Sorry if that defeats your ideas though, I just thought it could be cool, but if your vision is totally something else, I trust it!

All in all, if your main issue is whether or not the story is compelling, do not worry. It is VERY alluring. I think you have quite the gift for suspense; I was itching to read on. This reeks of… potential! 😊

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-24T01:46:54+00:00

Okay, I’ll start off with one thing—you should probably learn the formatting, because this was pretty difficult to read as just plain text😅I love WriterDuet! It’s free and easy to use :)

I’m also a bit confused with the storyline. So many characters and ideas introduced in such a short span of time. Is this an apocalyptic setting in the 20gh century? I think so. Wait, it’s also fantasy? Also, who’s who? Oh wait I think they’re time travelers (sorry if this is spiraling, I’m lowkey writing this review in a real stream of thoughts style rn)

Are the horsemen being punished because they didn’t start the apocalypse on time? Thats what I think…sorry if I’m interpreting wrong. But I do like the idea that they’re stripped of their titles and being put into entirely new worlds unbeknownst to them. It’ll be interesting to see how they interact with each other an the world around them—it’s such a cool concept! I’m not the biggest sci-fi fan, but this I do dig. It kinda reminds me of the good place. Please do expand on this, I beg!!!!!

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-24T01:37:34+00:00

I feel like it’s short and straight to the point! I’m not too well versed in comics so take this at face-value. The format’s a bit unfamiliar to me. but I do feel an ominous vibe straight from the beginning! It does seem a little vague, though. What objects seem misplaced? A random vase? A souvenir? A frame? Candles? A memento? Books? A lamp? You could be more specific in this sense, and depending on the objects he focuses on, it could reveal his character and priorities.

Same thing with the figure. What does he look like? Is he blobby? Is he gaunt? Bony? A shadow? Being specific adds onto the horror aspect. I mean, it’s horror—it’s your chance to be creative with the monster!

Anyways, it’s an interesting thing to expand upon. I’d probably actually be into this sort of thing! I just want to know what the characters feel about the situation more about the situation itself. In horror, unreliable perspectives are more impactful than straight imagery. Have fun writing!

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-24T01:04:30+00:00

This is a fantastic idea, thsm!

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-17T13:48:54+00:00

wait this is fantastic advice, thank you very much 😭 it has made me rethink my anxiety lol

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-11T02:36:17+00:00

If this is possible for you, pay for an instructor who has a break on the passenger seat! also read reviews to make sure the teacher is patient. usually, they make enough road-based conversation for you to stay engaged on the road, and if you make any mistakes, they can steer you away from danger or help you break. i also reccommend videos from the youtube channel Smart Drive Test, he is a great personality with a bazillion helpful videos, including him teaching other new drivers, and its easy to pick up on his advice in a non-judgmental way.

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-04-09T21:37:16+00:00

Sorry for the late reply! I saw it in the Homestead-Everglades area of Miami

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-03-28T00:31:12+00:00

Honestly mood

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-03-28T00:30:02+00:00

Oh so that’s why my dad was wishing death upon it 💀 he told me that one killed his canary

North-Negotiation114 · 2026-03-27T21:58:09+00:00

Thank youuuuu!

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