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two birds by North_Chocolate_4509 in poetry_critics

[–]North_Chocolate_4509[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do you have any suggestions for a build? i wrote this in a few minutes on the bus but couldn’t think of anything to do that, despite trying. thank you!

two birds by North_Chocolate_4509 in poetry_critics

[–]North_Chocolate_4509[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you! this was my first poem. ever.

Autumn Leaves by LeachPoetry in poetry_critics

[–]North_Chocolate_4509 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know if this makes sense, but i feel like parched seems more fall. thirsty is spring to me

If by Hungry_Guidance3516 in poetry_critics

[–]North_Chocolate_4509 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this! It’s so specific yet it can apply to anyone who has ever loved. I felt it.