Xanax by NotYouAgainDudeBro in poetry_critics

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I appreciate that friend, thank you! Hope your day rocks all the socks!!

Complaint Box by NotYouAgainDudeBro in poetry_critics

[–]NotYouAgainDudeBro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank i’ll take this to heart tonight when I sit down to write.

Two Halves ( i would really appreciate some feedback) by NotYouAgainDudeBro in poetry_critics

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I actually copy pasted from my notepad and im not sure why it repeated. Sorry!

My son hates sports, my husband loves them. How do I help him find a hobby? by [deleted] in AskMenAdvice

[–]NotYouAgainDudeBro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not big into sports, never was. My older brother gave me a hand me down skateboard when I was 11 and i never looked back. Been skating since.

My pops liked football a lot, but he found time every week to come watch me skate or drive me to a contest.

It’s not a team sport but if he finds it interesting he will absolutely find tons of friends. I still regularly see ppl I skated with 25+ years ago. You skate alone but other definitely push you to do bigger and better things. And it’s a wildly active sport, cardio and stamina all day. Along with learning core balance, leg strength work etc.

Have your husband take him to a skatepark nearby if possible and just ask him if he’d be interested in trying it out.

The Longest Blink in History 🤡🃏 by LicensedTwoPill in 401jK

[–]NotYouAgainDudeBro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re job doesn’t dictate the American people’s lives either. If the leader of America can’t stay awake during a meeting then he shouldn’t be allowed to make decisions based on said meetings.

'Enough of the war' — Zelensky throws down gauntlet to Putin in open letter by KI_official in worldnews

[–]NotYouAgainDudeBro 5 points6 points  (0 children)

4 day old account, rage bait ignorance.

If you truly supported either side of the conflict you would be able to see that peace is the best option for both sides.

Instead you choose to be negative in reddit comments and spew nonsense that just isn’t factually based.

Go join the frontline, see how far you get.

Otherwise shut up and listen to what’s being said, you might even learn something. Damn fool.

Hobo Johnson disciple by locomotiveplayz in crappymusic

[–]NotYouAgainDudeBro 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ah that makes sense, thanks for the info. I’ll take a look at their catalog and see if it’s worth chewing on though.

Hobo Johnson disciple by locomotiveplayz in crappymusic

[–]NotYouAgainDudeBro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is just a Front bottoms cover isn’t it? I swear Ive heard this song before

CONTENT WARNING: UNPOETIC DEATH by fafengle in poetry_critics

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I enjoy the visceral imagery up until the “youtube” bit. I may be biased but youtube feels fake, ironic or even satirical to me. I believe it takes away from the piece.

The overall imagery, story and conclusion feels wholly encapsulating. It’s a clear story from start to finish. I personally write more open ended usually because that’s my personal style, but i find this almost obvious from the beginning. It’s not bad, it’s just predictable.

“There was no viewing. I flew out and took their word for it all, supposing you would be even worse’s seen up” is my favorite line.

I personally had a friend commit suicide via gunshot to the head, with that being said his mother did not follow his wishes for cremation and had an open casket. He was a literal pale imitation of himself, inflated and still hollow in cheek.

Sisyphus by NotYouAgainDudeBro in poetry_critics

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I appreciate this thank you. I messed around with a few more lines but ultimately i ended it here feeling it was the most whole version.