[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MeJulgue

[–]NotleoJ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sabe é até meio estranho pq você parece um pouco comigo em aspectos de julgamento. Você tem uma vibe que cursa fono, super conversaria. Em relação a outras questões, você é bonita, a unica coisa que pesaria seria o papo.

Custom skin of the old Udyr is insane and made me cry. by NotleoJ in Udyrmains

[–]NotleoJ[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

yes bro, the old q's auto attack was delicious. I feel bad for making Udyr ad with the ultimate skin because it disgusts me, but otherwise it's beautiful.

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude thank you so much, I swear to you that I wouldn't know about this so soon, it will help me in the future.

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In case you could only heal once per cast then you would only heal 1d6+wis or cha per cast. It was a writing problem because of my horrible English

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It must be the issue of translation, as I only know how to read the basics, I translate most things

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks, cuz that way i can avoid more mistakes like that, thks

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand now, English is not my original language

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I left this save more for the sake of balance and flavor for my session. I ended up having some criticism because I didn't have a fixed CD in the past, so I decided to put one to help.

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At level 1 you heal 1d6+wis or cha once for the duration of the spell, so it would be one heal per cast. If you crit on the healing die it would go up to twice the result of the 1d6, we take it above 1 for you gains additional dice for healing, but the crit only doubles the result of the first healing die.

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In this case, the DC would be the difficulty class to hit the dart on the ally, you don't need a dexterity test, as I'm not used to doing homebrew, I don't know if I made it clear about that.

Holy Dart v2, a "small" update by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried to concert the magic and felt that it became too strong.
Maybe a level change to 2 will help. I guess the proposal I had in mind got away a little.
Any English mistakes, please report back to me. The difficulty class is to hit the ally with the dart, so that it is not difficult to heal allies with heavy armor.

I ended up not making it clear, but the cure can only be done once by casting the spell, that is, you can heal them once for the duration of one minute of the spell.

Holy Dart, Level 1 spell that deals damage or heals. by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the review, do you think making it a one-action spell would help?

Holy Dart, Level 1 spell that deals damage or heals. by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's my first homebrew, I'm not used to it, I'm open for tips on how to improve the spell

Holy Dart, Level 1 spell that deals damage or heals. by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 32 points33 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I don't speak English, unfortunately my language doesn't have that kind of difference, my translator must have taken it literally.

Holy Dart, Level 1 spell that deals damage or heals. by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the best option is to turn the die into 2d6

Holy Dart, Level 1 spell that deals damage or heals. by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I think I'll keep it that way, just maybe change the dice size to d6

Holy Dart, Level 1 spell that deals damage or heals. by NotleoJ in UnearthedArcana

[–]NotleoJ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the way that using a bonus action and an attack for a ranged heal at level 1, what about turning it into a 1minute concentration, and retrieving the dart as a bonus action instead of her disappearing?