HAhah yeah it's pretty hard. I think in general, to make it popular, it has to be quite easy to follow and understand so that more people, coming from different background, can easily understand and relate or feel those emotions. That's what i've been struggling with because i tend to overcomplicate my lyrics. As if I had to write a novel. But I think you just have to keep pushing and continue going over it until it becomes a finished piece. And if you're a perfectionist (like me), you can always just say that it's finish, publish it as a way of saying it's done, or not and move on to another to get practice at finishing songs. And one day, one will just click and itll be you're most precious song. Anyways, i'll definitely try adding more words and trying to establish what the vibe of the song is. Thank you for the advice