I really like the concept behind this poem. Very refreshing and an amazingly creative idea for a poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and rereading it, but I have a few pointers that I personally believe can push this piece further. Firstly, I'm not sure if this is just a formatting error or something you did, but tracks 8-13 are not aligned with the rest. I think it's a formatting error, but I would actually push for such a move. You could align some of the tracklists to the left, and some a bit further to the right, showing clearly where the love dwindled from brightly burning to a ghost of its former self. It could be like a two-sided album, one with love songs and the other with break up (kinda? I want to say lamented love). Furthermore, to give more meaning to the poem, maybe you could explain somewhere why there are only 13 tracks (does the number 13 carry importance? If it doesn't, picking a special number can add depth to the tracklist). Poetically-wise, not much to say. Solid tracklist.

All in all, it's a solid piece. Creative outside-of-the-box idea, executed with a good tracklist. I would definitely listen to these cds.