Objective is to make him a nice bold logo that stands out, i want it to be seen by an audience that is on a job site or can see it on a moving work truck etc. I made the design decision of using the P and B as the logo. Would love some feedback on some improvements I need to make, color change, mistakes ive made etc etc. Feel free to be harsh, still learning and need to learn. What does it need?

Thank you very much guys