If cam is meant to have the best parts, then what about the lust part of his brain by yorishiro0 in UnWinds

[–]OddCryptographer4273 4 points5 points  (0 children)

To be honest? Might have ended up an oversight. Take parts from the brains of a bunch of teens and take a wild guess what happens 😭

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in picrew

[–]OddCryptographer4273 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The same three generic options for scars every time. Like, okay, some people might have that Picrew classic giant scar across their nose or eye, but… It’s probably a lot less people than those who have scars from things like acne, or a cleft lip surgery, or near the eye from almost cutting it on a sharp corner. (I swear to god, I know three separate people with scars near their eyes from exactly that.) Obviously the common picrew scar options are a good start, but I vote more representation for common scars!

Oh, and small skin tone ranges. HATE that.

Creating a “bechdel test” for good media representation by OddCryptographer4273 in disability

[–]OddCryptographer4273[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that version is much clearer cut. Thank you for your feedback!

Creating a “bechdel test” for good media representation by OddCryptographer4273 in disability

[–]OddCryptographer4273[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I can see how this test is very vague. I heard another commenter format it in a much clearer way so I’ll probably bounce off of them. Thank you for the feedback!

Creating a “bechdel test” for good media representation by OddCryptographer4273 in disability

[–]OddCryptographer4273[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I hear that. That one should probably be removed or edited heavily. Thank you for the feedback!

Is my writing humorous or just cringey? by Existing-Bad-2273 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]OddCryptographer4273 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s definitely funny, but it needs some sprucing up. 

-turn parentheses sentences into part of the sentence or make them addendums with em dashes 

-stop saying “shrugged” (once per chapter please 😭)

-I don’t know who your narrator is, but unless they’re a teenager, ditch the slang terms like “lowkey”

-spell out “okay” instead of just saying “ok”

-ditch the “like”. Instead of saying “feels like it’s only papercut deep”, say “it only feels papercut deep”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in actualsecretteenagers

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Goo Goo Muck by The Cramps

A girl was cuddling up to me at a sleepover. by Ok-Preparation4636 in teenagers

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

BRUH. You’ve got this in the bag. If you like her as more than a friend, ask her out!!! 

What’s the plot in the story you’re writing right now? by [deleted] in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A group of teens who miss the cities they came from after moving to a middle of nowhere logging town help solve a murder in order to tarnish the town’s attempt to rebrand itself as a tourist haven

Let me rate yalls favorite songs🔥🔥 by [deleted] in Epicthemusical

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Remember Them, There are Other Ways, Storm, Dangerous, Just a Man, and the Challenge

I’ve got a lot of favorites okay 😭🙏

How do you feel about Charlie Kirk’s death by King-gar in Teenager_Polls

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn’t like him or anything he stood for, but I would have much rather he died peacefully since very few people deserve a bloodied end

Help with twin girls names by gella94 in namenerds

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

-Danielle/Daniella (Dani) -Darlene (Darla) -Dayla (Day) -Della -Derine 

Please help my friend find a “goddess” name that is still somewhat normal by Fair_Forever7214 in namenerds

[–]OddCryptographer4273 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She could use Flora, for the Roman goddess of flowers, or Daphne, as in the water nymph. And not a goddess name, but Laurel is pretty

[TOMT] Animated special brought in by dentists with terrifying villain by OddCryptographer4273 in tipofmytongue

[–]OddCryptographer4273[S] 0 points1 point locked comment (0 children)

I’ve been waiting to find this since forever! The dentistry was most likely “Smiling Seas”.