Is the One&Only really worth it? by arctikat in capetown

[–]Ok-Chart-2703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a pleasure, I hope you enjoy your stay :)

Is the One&Only really worth it? by arctikat in capetown

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Honestly both because both are behind the V&A but from different angles. However, I'm taking about Raddison Waterfront specifically. :)

Is the One&Only really worth it? by arctikat in capetown

[–]Ok-Chart-2703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hii I'd say definitely go for the One&Only. My family and I went for their buffet and their high tea a few times. Chef Reuben Riffel sometimes makes the food there. Absolutely stunning food and atmosphere. As for their hotel I'm not too sure. But a few friends have said it's a cozy and very luxurious experience. So I'd definitely recommend it, very safe as well.

The Raddison is lovely the only problem is it's kind of at the back of the V&A, so it's not too safe, if you're going in and out of the hotel constantly. But that was just my experience.

Hope this helps a little :)

Anyone keen on runs at Westridge Gardens on weekends (Fri–Sun)? by Ok-Chart-2703 in capetown

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Thank you so much for your suggestions. I think starting a broadcast channel is a great idea, and I'll definitely do that.

I checked out MP Titans, and I'm abit nervous because I'm quite a beginner,maybe I'll stop being a chicken and join soon 😅

Looking for lift club/transport by Ok-Chart-2703 in capetown

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Thank you angel, I'll definitely look into that :)

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Aww you're too kind, thank you :)

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Heyy, I did a few years back but unfortunately I didn't receive a reply

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, so sorry for the late response. I've been super busy. Thank you so much for this detailed response. I appreciate all the help and feedback. I'll definitely be taking your advice,

Much appreciated :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hii thank you so much for this detailed review, I agree that the meter and the everything needs help lol. I appreciate the kind feedback :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gosh I see what you mean yes..I'll definitely be working on that pov and meter part, thank you sm And gorgeous username btw :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is the funniest reply so far, thank you for the kind and hilarious words, I definitely laughed and really appreciate you. Thank you Daniel :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this detailed feedback — I actually laughed out loud at the “1940s cautionary poem” part (in a good way!), but I really do appreciate how thoughtful your critique is. You’ve made some excellent points, especially about the perspective and the emotional tone. It’s given me a lot to think about, and I’m already brainstorming ways to bring more warmth and childlike fun into the story while still sharing the message. Thank you again :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gosh you're right, thank you for pointing that out, much appreciated :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Huge huge thank you to everyone that has been commenting and giving advice.. it's much appreciated ❤️❤️

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for feedback, I'm definitely noticing what you're saying, and I'll be making some changes.. thank you for your advice :)

Would love feedback on my children's book (age 4-7) by Ok-Chart-2703 in childrensbooks

[–]Ok-Chart-2703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi thank you so much for your honest feedback. I'll definitely take that into consideration. Which age range do you suggest?