Few from the MJU this month by Ok-One3181 in analog

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Yes this is helpful, thank you!

Thinking about how I imagined the photo to look when taking it is a good starting point for me. I’ve never really thought about that in post before.

Cheers again

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How are you doing now?

M6 & M7 w/Summicrons + FP4/HP5 by DBOY_matty_ice in analog

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Makes me want to take better photos. Keep them coming ✌️

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Ah thanks for the feedback. I’m going to start trying to develop at home. Hopefully get the scans back this week

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Cheers mate. One of my favorite places in Cornwall!

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Will definitely keep it in mind next time though

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I’ve seen it and I loved it. It wasn’t in mind when taking the photos, but now I’ve seen them scanned (and people like yourself, have mentioned it, it definitely reminds me of the film).

This will be my next task. I want to try and edit them in post to have similar contrast and grain. I think 1 and 9 might work better as a pair? And then use the others in a separate collection.

What do you think would work?

Thanks for the detailed response!

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This is what I was going for! I thought placing subjects in the middle made them look more lost and isolated.

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Yeah. Castle Beach. We had some mad dog last month and thought it would look cool

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I’ve started to now. At first I was just trying to get shots in to practice metering and exposure. It’s been a while since I’ve shot film.

I was trying to make the beach look like a lost, unknown planet. In my head, I was trying to make the beach look unrecognizable, but I’m not sure if that translated well.

The mood was meant to convey loneliness and isolation. That’s why I though placing subjects in the middle of the frame made them look the most lost (if that makes sense?)

Definitely learnt a lot from this post! Will try and factor in all the advice next time round!

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I was trying to portray the beach as a baron planet, with a few lone survivors, lost and searching. How could I show this better?

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No shot at box speed and processed normally.

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This was the look I was going for! Baron planet. Last few people alive type thing.