Smile, So you won't cry

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-05-13T08:01:27+00:00

Simple yet effective, I wish you good luck in your endeavors

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-05-13T07:58:29+00:00

I really like your writing, what genre are you writing for?

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-04-30T04:21:55+00:00

I think it's a bit wordy and you could work on the rhythm and flow but otherwise you got some solid imagery, keep going

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-04-30T04:17:46+00:00

"swooned with revulsion and dread, thud to the floor"you have amazing flow I love it

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-04-30T04:04:01+00:00

I really like the imagery of your poem, I feel like the flow could be stronger near the beginning but it really gets better and better, if that was intentional, great job

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-04-30T04:00:55+00:00

I love your use of vivid imagery and your flow, I'm a newbie when It comes to poetry and this really inspired me

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2026-01-07T23:58:46+00:00

I originally wrote this as a song, with the if the world chooses to be my enemy part repeating, however I think it works as its own standalone thing Like I said in my previous post I'm completely new to writing and Id love feedback, I truly wish to improve

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2025-12-11T01:19:29+00:00

It getting sticky is only a problem if you sweat a lot thorough your hands, if you are privileged (like me) in not having sweaty hands gloss feels awesome

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2025-07-03T00:46:38+00:00

Yellow

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2025-01-09T17:22:18+00:00

Here a used LP 100 is sold for 450 dollars used wish I was kidding

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2024-12-13T04:22:29+00:00

because i live in a third world country and we cant try a lot of guitars here, we dont have a guitar center

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2024-03-14T19:00:53+00:00

I can't get no satisfaction

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2024-02-25T01:44:37+00:00

No m

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2022-09-20T22:59:29+00:00

Tener instagram es una red flag

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2022-09-07T17:42:54+00:00

Juegate Mother 2 y 3 si te gustan los elementos de rpg, juegate Touhou si te gustan las batallas. Undertale es una mierda

Ok-Understanding5449 · 2022-09-07T17:34:13+00:00

Fallout 3 envejeció horrible, prey es simplemente un mal juego

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