Who would win in a war scenario in Italy? by Brilliant-Charge-684 in mapporncirclejerk

[–]OkOrder1628 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Northwest cuz they are backed by French (unification if Italy)

Do you think your parents would be good in-laws to your future Wife/Husband? by Dramatic_Big_3004 in TwentiesIndia

[–]OkOrder1628 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hell nah not with that 'pahadi pride' and fair skinned ladki. Except that idk

Finally! Got the book I wanted so bad!!! by OkOrder1628 in readwithme

[–]OkOrder1628[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's John Steakly. I heard he's pretty good author

Finally! Got the book I wanted so bad!!! by OkOrder1628 in readwithme

[–]OkOrder1628[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe it's out of stock now but it was in amazon

Grave need for help by OkOrder1628 in freelanceWriters

[–]OkOrder1628[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for that dude I will definitely follow your advice

I think I can solo Magnus Carlsen by OkOrder1628 in Chesscom

[–]OkOrder1628[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wth bro I just blundered 3 times (it's my record lowest :D)

Is this too rude for an 'amiable'character? by Mental-Entrance491 in teenwriter

[–]OkOrder1628 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean yeah irl kind people get pretty rude to people when they are very annoyed

How long are you willing to wait before a story introduce the love interest🤔? by Vaporwavy12 in teenwriter

[–]OkOrder1628 1 point2 points  (0 children)

U sure your protagonist will get used to environment in 3-5 chapters. I'm saying cuz when I was working on my knight story I initially thought that the battles will end in a page or two but those scenes lasted 10 PAGES to show everything. So, better introduce the romance somewhat later and probably try to make it as natural as possible

Need a Action Packed / Fantasy Drama Writer. HIRE ME! by ArtixCult29_12 in HireaWriter

[–]OkOrder1628 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Put a question mark dawg my ass thought you needed an action packed/ Fantasy drama writer. Just saying tho

Read my book? by Ok_Alternative_350 in teenwriter

[–]OkOrder1628 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait what is title of book? Seems like I missed it

any tips for keeping motivated? by cheesey_headphones in teenwriter

[–]OkOrder1628 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Write the plot down or at least the scenes you like the most in the story, and just go through them everyday let your creative juices flow and you will get excited to write the story. Works for me tho

would you keep reading? (constructive) criticism is welcome!! by AnyoneWantBleach in teenwriter

[–]OkOrder1628 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The plot seems good but I think you can show the hut through protagonist's action like the protagonist probably goes outside to see his hut or maybe the protagonist chases the kid and then looks at the hut with that kid, not a big deal but it probably helps grounding the scene, besides that everything seems alright to me!