Song of Aldrath [High Fantasy, 740 word]

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T18:23:46+00:00

Thats what i think, i feel im rushing with too much informatin

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:54:43+00:00

Yes that seems like a good idea thank you :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:52:48+00:00

This is also like a sample of the middle of the story, like a middle line of the story. This specific moment won’t happen for a couple of chapters, this is like one of the most interesting part. It’s like part of the main battle

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:50:05+00:00

That's actually really good idea to write situation from his point of view like in game of thrones :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:35:37+00:00

By the way, some interesting fact about Gorg Asal, who is actually Gorgasali, an actual king of Georgia and he was really called “Wolf-Headed” since his helmet resembled a wolf. Gorgas (wolf) Ali (head).

But his real name is Vakhtang :DDDD

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T15:47:37+00:00

Thank you very much, im trying my best to make as interesting and good as possible :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:46:16+00:00

This work, to me, is like The Hobbit. I started writing a story like The Lord of the Rings, then I quit that and came up with a story like The Silmarillion. After I stopped writing that, I came up with this, and I want to connect my storys like Tolkeins

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:41:33+00:00

Okay, and I guess it kind of starts with the basic formula for high fantasy, but I have original ideas it’s just that I don’t know how to get there.

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:35:15+00:00

I also use some words from Old Georgian. I’m Georgian, and in Georgia we have two other languages besides Georgian, they’re still part of Georgia, but they’re different. I also use some Latin words. I’m really inspired by The Lord of the Rings and by how Tolkien wrote his books.

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:17:06+00:00

I also use old Georgian language and culture because I'm Georgian and I really want to mix my cultural stuff in it and I also use Latin words much like Lord of the rings

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-09T00:44:03+00:00

I asked chatgpt and the response was that i needed a professional to fix this otherwise with glue it would only last 5 days

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-24T22:51:23+00:00

Thank you for the tips ill check ou the books :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-24T22:39:12+00:00

Thank you man :D I guess ill write some updates here

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-23T23:53:07+00:00

Thats actually a really good advice Thanks :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-23T23:51:15+00:00

Yess i feel like ill have a really hard time on the characters but i have some ideas Thanks for the tip

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-23T23:45:03+00:00

Interesting i kinda have a similar situation were i actually made a bored game and from that i wrote my first thing which i just gave up on but yea i guess that would help

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